Introduce myself to you

hi ,everyone.I m a lovely girl.China is my motherland.my Chinese name is wenmin(文敏）,and you can call me Katherine in English.my hobbies are sleeping ,chatting and watching (consistent verb tense/form ing ing ing)) movies. I am living on an island which located in to the southest of China (Hainan? Aomen?) . I love drinking coconut juice, it tastes great  well. My main everyday/staple food is rice which that is grown mostly in the south of China. There are vary kinds of many beautiful scenic places in my country, and . Here also have lots of places of interesting. However, I am really interested just attracted to in ZhouZhuang (a water town in Jiangsu?), it the looks so much like a Chinese brush drawings from long ago. I am also a friendly girl. I am looking forward to making friends who can speak English. Thank you!

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Introduce myself to you

Hi ,everyone. I m a lovely girl China is my motherland named is Wen-Min(文敏）,and but you can call me Katherine in English. My motherland is China. 

                My hobbies are sleeping, chatting and watch movie. (1 movie)

                My hobbies are sleeping, chatting and watching movies. (Many movies) 

I am living on an island which located in the southest of China. 

I am living on an island which is located in Southeastern China. You need a big S for Southeastern. Which is not a verb (动词）so you need to add is/are/was/were to complete depending on the subject.

I love drinking coconut juice, because it tastes well good. My The main food I eat is rice which grows in the south of Southern China.There are vary many kinds of beautiful secenary scenery in my country.

Here also have lots of places of interesting. (Here can not have!) 这里不能有！ 你们的中文 ：这里有什么 = There is/are ______ here.

There are also lots of interesting places. 

However, I am just most attracted to ZhouZhuang because it the looks like a Chinese brush drawing.I am also a friendly gril. I am looking forward to making friends who can speak English. Thank you!

Introduce myself to you

hi ,everyone.I m a lovely girl.China is my motherland.my Chinese name is wenmin(文敏）,but you can call me Katherine in English.my hobbies are sleeping ,chatting and watching movies.I am living on an island which is located in the southest of China .I love drinking coconut juice,it tastes good.my main food is rice, which grows in the south of China.There are various kinds of beautiful scenery in my country.There are also a lot of interesting places here. However,I am just attracted to ZhouZhuang which looks like a Chinese brush drawing.I am also a friendly girl. I am looking forward to making friends who can speak English. Thank you!

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