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About me In this post I'm going to talk about me. I'm from Gran Canaria, a famous turistic island from Spain. I've lived here all my life and I like this place. In fact, some experts have said that it has the best weather of the world. I don't think so, but I agree that the weather is awesome (around 24 degrees the wole year). I finished my degree of computer science and now I am working as web developer. I keen on cinema, sports, music, and being with friends. I also love travelling. I visited Tunisia, Itali, Czech Republic, France, German, England, Portugal, USA, Russia, Austria, ... In my free time I usually go to the gym, wacht football matchs (my favourite team is Real Madrid), listen to music (many differents types, even soundtracks) and go out with friends.

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About me

In this post I'm going to talk about me. I'm from Gran Canaria, a famous turistic island from in Spain. I've lived here all my life and I like this place. In fact, some experts have said that it has the best weather of the world. I don't think so, but I agree that the weather is awesome (around 24 degrees the whole year).

I finished my degree of in computer science and now I am working as web developer. I am keen on cinema, sports, music, and being with friends. I also love travelling. I visited Tunisia, Itali, Czech Republic, France, German, England, Portugal, USA, Russia, Austria, ...

In my free time I usually go to the gym, watch football matches (my favourite team is Real Madrid), listen to music (many differents types, even soundtracks) and go out with friends.

 

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About me

In this post, I'm going to talk about me myself. I'm from Gran Canaria, a famous turistic tourist island from in Spain. I've lived here all my life and I like this place it. In fact, some experts have said* that it has the best weather of in the world. I don't think so, but I agree that the weather is awesome (around 24 degrees the whole** year).

I finished my degree of in computer science and now I am working as web developer. I am keen on*** cinema, sports, music, and being with friends. I also love travelling traveling.  I've visited Tunisia, Itali, Czech Republic, France, Germany, England, Portugal, USA, Russia, Austria, ...

In my free time, I usually go to the gym, wacht watch football matchs (my favourite**** team is Real Madrid), listen to music (many differents types, even soundtracks) and go out with friends.

 

*you could also say

"some experts have claimed" 

This is a stronger way of phrasing a sentence about "expert" opinion

 

**you could also say

"around 24 degrees year-round"

"around 24 degrees all year long"

"around 24 degrees throughout the year"


***you could also say
"I am interested in..."
"I enjoy..." 
"My hobbies are..." 


****in the UK, this word is spelled "favourite", in the US, it is spelled "favorite"


¡buen trabajo!

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