tansw2k2001's notebook entry: Oct 19, 2010
the sentence is " maaf Steven aku. aku tak bisa memaksa diri ku ber sama mu semoga lu mendapat kan yang lebih baik dari aku sekali lgi. maaf Steven aku ya. jaga dirimu kita kan masih bisa ber teman...terimah kasih banyak atas semua kebaikanmu.
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tansw2k2001's notebook entry: Oct 19, 2010
the sentence is " maaf Steven aku. aku tak bisa memaksa diri ku ber sama mu semoga lu mendapat kan yang lebih baik dari aku sekali lgi. maaf Steven aku ya. jaga dirimu kita kan masih bisa ber teman...terimah kasih banyak atas semua kebaikanmu.
Correction:
"Maafkan aku, Steven. Aku tak bisa memaksa diriku bersamamu. Semoga kamu mendapatkan yang lebih baik dari diriku (or you can use "aku", feel free to use it). Sekali lagi, maafkan aku, ya, Steven. Jaga dirimu. Kita (I think "kan" should be erased, because it will feel like ... um ... you forced him to "just be friend" with you) masih bisa berteman. Terima kasih banyak atas semua kebaikanmu."
You're good in Indonesian! But from what you write about, you should learn more about "imbuhan" like -kan, -ku, -ber. FYI, "imbuhan" always placed with the words, so write "bersama" instead of "ber sama", "mendapatkan" instead of "mendapat kan", etc. SOrry for bad ENglish, but I'm sure you'll understand it. Berlatih terus, ya! :D
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you want those senteces to be translate??
"I'm sorry Steven, I can't force my self to be with you. I hope you'll find a better person than me soon. I wanna say sorry for one more time, Steven.
Take care of your self, we can still be friend right. Thank you so much for all your kindness"
kurang lebih begitu-lah terjemahannya yah.. hehehe
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