My little essay on english language on lesson

So... I would like to live in UK because this very interesting country. I have read a lot about the UK. In the UK there is  good music, british rock groups are famous and popular in the world. This country has its unique culture. I'm learning English in my school, it is also a reason to visit UK. I befriend and talk to a girl who lives in UK. I like communicating with her. I would not like to live in the UK, but I would like to visit the UK. Because I can't live without Russia, the russian soul, the russian bear, russian vodka and russian balalaika.

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My little essay in English language on lesson (?)

So... I would like to live in the UK because this is a very interesting country. I many have read much about the UK. In the UK do they play good music. British rock groups are popular in around the world. This country have its has a unique culture. I'm learning English in my school (you say either "at my school" or "in school"), it is also an on occasional visits to the UK. I befriended and communicate with a girl who lives in the UK and I communicate with her often. I like to communicate with her. I not would not like to live in the UK, but I would like only visit UK. Because I can't live without Russia: russian soul, russian bear beer (I assume you mean Russian beer and not Russian bear, I don't know how I can live without a Russian bear either;) , russian vodka and russian balalaika.

You say at the beginning that you would like to live in the UK, but at the end you say that you would only like to visit.  You should change one of them.