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my apologize When I was a schoolgirl I’m very arrogant and made many mistakes. Because my smart and study well ,the teacher made me to be the monitor and help to collect our homework. I didn’t remember it clearly when that boy transfer to our school ,even I didn’t remember his name. But I know he sitted in the last row of the corner of our classroom. I know he was always neatly and quietly dressed, his smile like the sun. The handsome and faithfull appearance made him like a prince, but he was introverted and didn’t like to talk with other people . I know many girls in our class have a good impression of him except me, because my arrogant made myself like a queen in our class. I thought I was the header of my classmates, my job was to keep teacher’s order. So one day I did my routine work to collect their homework and every one handed it except him. I was angry and asked him why he didn’t. He said sorry because he feel unwell so he didn’t do it. I shouted to him for his lazy and told the teacher about it, the teacher didn’t blame and permitted him can don’t do homework anymore. I am very angry about him. Form then on he didn’t come to school . Many years later I know the truth about him, he has leukemia. Maybe I don’t have the chance to apologize to him for my arrogant.

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My Apologyize


When I was a schoolgirl, I’m was very arrogant and made many mistakes. Because my I was smart and I studied well. So the teacher made me to be the class monitor and to help her to collect our homework.


I didn’t don't remember it clearly now... when that There was this boy who had being transferred to our school. ,even I didn’t don't even remember his name. But All I know remembered is that he sitted sat in the last row; very near to  of the corner of our classroom. I know He was always very quiet and neatly and quietly dressed. His smile was like that of the sun. The His handsome and faithfull appearance winsome demeanor made him like a prince.  but However, he was introverted and didn’t like to talk/mix with others. people .


I know many girls in our class have a good impression of like him except me., This is because my arrogant arrogrance crowned made myself like a me Queen of in our the class. I thought I was the header of my classmates, my job was to keep teacher’s order No princeling shall upstage me for I am the ordained keeper of classroom order. So one day, when I did my routine work rounds to collect their homework from everyone.   and every one handed it All except for this prince... him. I was angry furious and asked him why he didn’t has none for me. He said sorry because apologized as he did not feel unwell so he didn’t do it. Hence no tribute.  I shouted to at him for his lazy laziness.  and told the teacher about it, I reported this to the teacher who didn’t not only let this indiscretion go but  blame and permitted him to forgo any future homework. can don’t do homework anymore. I am was very angry about livid! him. Form then on

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Then he didn’t never came to school class anymore...


Many years later, I know found out the truth... about him,. He had leukemia... Maybe I don’t have Never again, would I have the chance to apologize to him for my arrogant arrogrance. [I prefer "my jealous fit of anger".]


Well written story. It is filled with emotion, nostalgic, regret etc. So I polished it to a higher level. Hope you can learn from this polishing. :)

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My apology

When I was a schoolgirl, I was very arrogant and made many mistakes. Because I was smart and studied well ,the teacher made me class monitor and help collect our homework.
I don't clearly remember when the boy transferred to our school. I don't even remember his name. But I do remember he sat in the last row in the corner of our classroom. He was always quiet and neatly dressed; his smile was like the sun. His handsome and faithful appearance made him look like a prince, but he was introverted and didn’t like to talk with other people .
I knew that many girls in our class had a good impression of him except me, because my arrogance made me think that I was the queen in our class. I thought I was the head of my classmates. My job was to follow the teacher’s order. So one day I did my routine work to collect their homework and I handed them to everyone except him. I was angry and asked him why he didn’t (do his homework??). He apologized. He said he didn't do it because he felt unwell. I shouted to him for his laziness and told the teacher about it. The teacher didn’t reprimand and permitted him to not turn in his homework from that time on. I was very angry about him. From then on, he didn’t come to school .
Many years later I found out the truth about him; he has leukemia. Maybe I won't have the chance to apologize to him for my arrogance. ( I hope I have the chance to apologize to him for my arrogance*) 

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