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And again snow..
Snow again...
We all have thought summer has come, aren't we?
We all thought summer had come, didn't we?
But no such luck. Snow fell again.
(Awesome. I would probably have put an ellipsis between the two sentences, but that is just a style choice. But no such luck... snow fell again.)
Somewhere someone's walking in shorts, but you should put on a warm jacket and hat.
(I think there maybe should be a comma after somewhere: Somewhere, someone's walking..., but I'm not actually sure - punctuation can be hard even for native speakers haha. This sentence is very good though. You could try also: Maybe, somewhere, someone's walking in shorts, but you should put on a warm jacket and hat. This is saying that while it may be warm somewhere else, right here it is cold so you should dress up.)
Where are you, a hot sun?
Where are you, hot sun?
I hope that summer hears your call and comes soon!
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