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Those Days Music is the universal language and has such powerful influence on us. A couple of weeks ago I was listened to the 80´s music...wow! my mind was raptured back to those days when life was filled with enthusiasm for the future: romance, school, friends, carreer and a bright road ahead. I believe many people not matter the age might think or feel in the same way that I do. Are you agree with me?

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Those Days

Music is the universal language and has such a powerful influence on us.
A couple of weeks ago I was listening to some 80´s music...wow! My mind was transported back to those days when life was filled with enthusiasm for the future: romance, school, friends, carreer and a brighter road ahead (to keep referring to the future).


I believe many people, not matter the age, might think or feel the same way as I do. Do you agree with me?

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Those Days

Music is the universal language and has such a powerful influence on us.

A couple of weeks ago I was listening to some 80´s music...wow! My mind was transported back to those days when life was filled with enthusiasm for the future: romance, school, friends, carreer and a bright road ahead.

I believe many people, not matter the age, might think or feel the same way as I do. Do you agree with me?

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Those Days

Music is the ("a" would be a better option because personally i think there are more than one universal languages on this planet.)universal language and has such (you should add "a" here, though "influence" is an uncountable noun, but when preceded by an adjective, the word should take the indefinite article. Other examples are "a big vocabulary", "a huge knowledge" etc.) powerful influence on us.
A couple of weeks ago I was listened (should be "was listening")to the 80´s music...wow! my mind was raptured back (should be "pulled back")to those days when life was filled with enthusiasm for the future: romance, school, friends, carreer (spelling mistake, should be "career")and a bright road ahead.
I believe many people not matter the age (should be ", no matter how old they are, ")might think or feel in the same way that (you shoul always use "as" after "such", they always appear together)I do. Are (Do)you agree with me?

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Beautiful! And yes I agree. :)
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Hello Liz In these years the enjoyment was different respect now..other songs, other clothes, other customs....if you ask at the people that has lived that period, they tell about it really well....The guys of my generation cry again ( i don't know if it is correct ) the 80's music...Infact when i go to similar party, is alway funny...

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