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Those Days
Music is the universal language and has such a powerful influence on us.
A couple of weeks ago I was listening to some 80´s music...wow! My mind was transported back to those days when life was filled with enthusiasm for the future: romance, school, friends, carreer and a brighter road ahead (to keep referring to the future).
I believe many people, not matter the age, might think or feel the same way as I do. Do you agree with me?
Those Days
Music is the universal language and has such a powerful influence on us.
A couple of weeks ago I was listening to some 80´s music...wow! My mind was transported back to those days when life was filled with enthusiasm for the future: romance, school, friends, carreer and a bright road ahead.
I believe many people, not matter the age, might think or feel the same way as I do. Do you agree with me?
Those Days
Music is the ("a" would be a better option because personally i think there are more than one universal languages on this planet.)universal language and has such (you should add "a" here, though "influence" is an uncountable noun, but when preceded by an adjective, the word should take the indefinite article. Other examples are "a big vocabulary", "a huge knowledge" etc.) powerful influence on us.
A couple of weeks ago I was listened (should be "was listening")to the 80´s music...wow! my mind was raptured back (should be "pulled back")to those days when life was filled with enthusiasm for the future: romance, school, friends, carreer (spelling mistake, should be "career")and a bright road ahead.
I believe many people not matter the age (should be ", no matter how old they are, ")might think or feel in the same way that (you shoul always use "as" after "such", they always appear together)I do. Are (Do)you agree with me?
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