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我很自在
上个星期我毕业了!因为上课很费劲所以现在我觉得感觉很自在。虽然我有空了,但我不吃闲饭。我练习我的中文,还有我提高我做饭的水平。当然虽然我要做半日工作,但是我还是比较闲。
#It's very good,I think.
我很自在 心情很轻松
上个星期我毕业了!上课很费劲,所以现在我觉得很自在自在多了/很轻松。虽然我有空闲下来了,但我不吃闲饭。我练习我的中文,还有我努力提高我做饭的水平。当然我还是要做半日工作打工/上半天班,但是我比较闲了。
不自在 is “uncomfortable”/ “uneasy” while 不轻松 is “leaden” or “demanding”, so I suppose 轻松 suits better for the title.
闲下来 signals there is a halt (also could be an endless one) to the busy life, but 有空 is usually within a certain period of time. 今天晚上有空 下个礼拜有空 这两个月都有空 现在有空
他还没闲下来。 他还没有空。
提高 is the goal here, so a verb like "want to" or "try to" is needed. Considering the previous sentence uses 练习, 努力 is recommended as it is already in progress.
打工:doing part-time jobs 上半天班:working for about half of the regular working hours
我很自在 心情很轻松
上个星期我毕业了!上课很费劲,所以现在我觉得很自在自在多了/很轻松。虽然我有空闲下来了,但我不吃闲饭。我练习我的中文,还有我努力提高我做饭的水平。当然我还是要做半日工作打工/上半天班,但是我比较闲了。
不自在 is “uncomfortable”/ “uneasy” while 不轻松 is “leaden” or “demanding”, so I suppose 轻松 suits better for the title.
闲下来 signals there is a halt (also could be an endless one) to the busy life, but 有空 is usually within a certain period of time. 今天晚上有空 下个礼拜有空 这两个月都有空 现在有空
他还没闲下来。 他还没有空。
提高 is the goal here, so a verb like "want to" or "try to" is needed. Considering the previous sentence uses 练习, 努力 is recommended as it is already in progress.
打工:doing part-time jobs 上半天班:working for about half of the regular working hours
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