Ohayoo gozaimasu!
Ohayoo minna-san!
Watashi wa Roberta, watashi 19 desu, demo watashi no tanjoobi chikai desu!
Watashi no machi ooki dewa arimasen, demo chikai ROMA desu, watashi to watashi no tomodachi issho ni yuku ROMA ressha.
Watashi daisuki nippon!
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Ohayoo gozaimasu!
Ohayoo gozaimasu! (Both Ohayoo and Ohayou are fine.)
Ohayoo minna-san!
Ohayoo mina-san!
Watashi wa Roberta desu. watashi wa 19-sai desu, demo watashi no tanjoobi wa chikai desu!
Watashi no machi wa ookii dewa arimasen, demo Roma ni chikai desu, watashi to watashi no tomodachi wa issho ni ressha de Roma ni iki-mashita.
Watashi daisuki nippon!
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Ohayou gozaimasu!
Ohayou minna-san!
Watashi wa Roberta desu, watashi wa 19(->jyuu-kyuu) sai desu, demo watashi no tanjoubi wa chikai desu!
Watashi no machi ooki dewa arimasen, demo chikai ROMA desu, watashi to watashi no tomodachi issho ni yuku ROMA ressha. (<=Sorry I can't understand what you meant by this sentence)
Watashi daisuki nippon! Watashi wa nihon wo daisukidesu.
Hello MissLawliet, that was very good. I corrected some minor mistakes. Keep up your practice and you'll get much better!!!
NOTES: 19 is jyuu-kyuu in Japanese. Also, in Japanese they don't usually use 'watashi' more than once in a conversation, sentence etc. And, it is better and more natural to say Nihon than Nippon.
^_^ Ganbatte kudasai! (<-Do your best)
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Hi Roberta, you've already gotten great corrections, please let me give my opinion. "Watashi wa Roberta desu. 19 sai desu. Demo (watashi no) tanjoubi wa mou sugu desu. Watashi no sundeiru machi wa chiisai desu ga RŌMA no chikaku desu. Watashi to (watashi no) tomodachi wa yoku issho ni densha de Rōma he (or ni) ikimasu.(Watashi to tomodachi wa jikan ga aru toki ni densha de Rōma he(or ni) iku koto ga suki desu. = when my friends and I have some free time, we like to go to Rome by the train.)" I hope this helps you. Ciao.
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