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Why I Want a Further Education Since I receives a master's degree, my eagerness of learning has been growing stronger. I yearn for a further study for myself and for the society. On one hand, to be good at something you love should be the goal of life. A further education at a university will enable me to specialize in a certain field of knowledge, preparing me to become professional. Besides, it will help develop in me the ability to do researches independently as well as cooperate with peer groups. To innovate ideas that derive from the theories and our society, I will organize a comprehensive research project which includes article review, data collection, in-depth interview, and analysis writing. The life as a postgraduate will be a valuable experience for me, which requires perseverance, dedication, hard work and enthusiasm. Thus, the process will improve my mindset, bring forth a stronger character, and the most important, the happiness of accomplishment. On the other hand, if I am good at something, I can serve the society better. As an saying goes, "Success if when you add value to yourself; significance is when you add value to others."The effort that is put constantly will lay a solid foundation of knowledge. Knowledge is power, which creates opportunities for me to do something good to improve our society and the fellow citizens' life. Consequently, I must never be afraid to go too far, for an advance learning will make all the difference, not only for myself but for a bigger self.

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Why I Want a Further Education

Since I received my master's degree, my eagerness of learning has been growing stronger. I yearn for a further studies for myself and to contribute to society.

On one hand, to be good at something you love should be the goal of life. A further education at a university would enable me to specialize in a certain field of knowledge, preparing me to become a professional. Besides, it would help to develop in me the my ability to do independent research as well as cooperating with peers. To innovate ideas that derive from the theories and our society, I would like to organize a comprehensive research project which includes article review, data collection, in-depth interview, and analysis writing. Working as a postgraduate will be a valuable experience for me that requires my perseverance, dedication, hard work and enthusiasm. Thus, the process will improve my mindset, bring forth a stronger character, and the most importantly, lead to happiness and a feeling of accomplishment.

On the other hand, if I am good at something, I can better serve (the) society. As the saying goes, "Success is if/when you add value to yourself; Significance is when you add value to others". Constant effort will lay a solid foundation of knowledge. Knowledge is power which creates opportunities for me to do something good to improve our society and the fellow citizens' lives.

Consequently, I must never be afraid to go too far, for an advanced learning will make all the difference, not only for myself but for a bigger self?. (not sure what you intend to say here)

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