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On Luck
Luck plays a role in many occasions.
One occasion is when we fall in love with somebody, not knowing whether his/her feelings are the same as ours. Maybe we are so lucky that we find our true love, once and for all. However, many love stories refer to sad stories. Before meeting the right one, we may meet a few wrong people, which brings sweetest joy as well wildest woe. That is, we have to keep our hope and try our luck until the day when two hearts share one body and two souls turn into one mind.
Another occasion is when we choose a job, and the job chooses you. Before we get in a certain position, it is often vague whether we are qualified for the work and if we can enjoy in it. Similarly, the boss may not have sufficient time to know more about us. Therefore, we have good luck if we successfully pursue a dream job that is consistent with our ambitions and life plan. On the contrary, we may be unlucky that we find ourselves unsuitable for that kind of work. What's worse, our work efforts receive lower wages than they actually deserve.
Are there ways to help us avoid bad luck? The answer is "yes". As far as finding a soul mate is concerned, remember not to shed tears when we miss the sun, or we'll also miss the stars. Try to love and be a lovable person, and the best things will come when we least expect them to. As far as our jobs are concerned, we can make efforts to excel in what our dream job requires, and do comprehensive research before we decide to attend a job interview.
To sum up, as the above discussion shows, luck will be with us if we are well-prepared for the occasion. Good luck to us!
[Excellent work. In the one sentence, I substituted 'we' for 'you' because you started with 'we'. Once you start with a certain form (or pronoun), you should keep using it.]
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