I have a Dream

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If you have a dream,you and never go after it, ,you will never have realized it. ,If you never go pursue after what you want,_you will never attain it. know what is your real want.__If you never try something new, ,your life story will be boring you will never know if you like it.__And I ,I too have a dream, and I want to will go for it.

I have a dream, but sometimes, like most people, I will also feel like a floating weed, beyond my control most people,at sea.__Sometimes I believe my insistence will also think that is it right to insist on .__Sometimes I will feel lonely and sullensilently.__Facing those,_so what? I think my Life will have to go through it on regardless of what I feel.

I have a dream.__I want to realize it by myself. although I left far away from My family and my old friends are far away. to come to a strange city,_just for what I wanted.__Facing those ,so what? I think my Life have to will go on even though I am lonely and a stranger in this city. through it.

I have a dream.__Although I can not cannot earn so as much as I would like money now and just keep my life goes on.__living,I can not cannot buy so the many things that I wanted. .Facing those,So what? I think my Life have to go through it keeps on chugging along.

I have a dream,_I will take Three years hence before its first step is to realized. the first step, I think it is a My belief what give me is the power to insist on it ,and pull me through.  I will try my best to make it better.

You have very good ideas in your essay.  However, I can only correct what I am guessing your intent.  I could be wrong.  If you want a better correction, please provide your original Chinese.

Although the previous correction is better, the writing is boring.  It still contains Chinese flavour.  It is ok to have it but having too many of them around is not considered good in English.  Sometimes, you need to repeat for emphasis.  Sometimes, they become boring if not used for this purpose.

I have a day dream. If you have a dream and if you don't chase after it, then you will never attain it. If you don't chase after the thinking within your heart, you will never find your real self. Neither will you find your real self if you don't follow your heart.  If you don't tryNo new things to try and, your life willwill soon become stale and boring. [In English, different patterns are preferrable.]

I have a simple day dream. I shall go and chase after it.

I have a day dream. Sometimes, I too will feel perplexed. Sometimes too, and at other times, I pondered a ponderance if my insistence is correct after all. Sometimes, I too will feel Lonely and I feel - with indifference.  indifferent/unconcerned. Facing Looking at them... Then what? I think My life must be destined to experience/undergo these tribulations.

I have a day A dream I possess... I think I have to finish/complete them need to realize it myself. Thus/hence, I left my family and old friends... To come to a strange city I came because . All this because of my earlier insistence. Facing the decisions I made... these again... What about them? I think I have to finish/complete them myself!

I have a day A dream of my own... No It matters how little money I can earn now - It is just enough for my life's necessities and the books for study. Unable to buy things that I would like A thousand things I would like to have but not the means to get them now. [You can write poetically to give a different pace to this paragraph] Facing these this reality now... Again, what of it? I have to finish/complete them A dream to realized by myself.

I have a day A dream, now I have...  I think That within a span of three years' time, the first step of my life's goal will be realized. My belief and yearning shall be is the power behind my persistence. I must do best With all heart and soul; my strength, the best is yet to be.

Thanks for your correction.

You can go on polishing forever.  However, the greater the polish, the greater the difference is the translation.  You must not polish it so much that the original meaning changes.  To be able to reach this level, you need to more vocabulary, read more to get into the psyche of the language and write more to get the feeling.

Now the fun and the hard part begins.  With the structure in place, you need to add prepositions, conjunctions etc that is deemed unnecessary in Chinese but is a must in proper English.  The corrections are done in blue and comments in brown.

I have a day dream. If you have a dream and if you don't chase after it, then you will never get it. If you don't chase after the thinking within your heart, you will never find your real self. If you don't try new things, your life will become stale and boring and stale.

I have a simple day dream. I think, shall go and chase after it.

I have a day dream. Sometimes, I too will feel perplexed. Sometimes too, a ponderance if my insistence is correct. Sometimes, I too would will feel lonely and indifferent/unconcerned. Facing them these sort of things... Then what? I think my life must experience/undergo these.

I have a day dream. I think I have to finish/complete them myself. Thus/hence, I left my family, my and old friends. to come to a strange city. All this because of my earlier insistence. Facing these again... What then? I think I have to finish/complete them myself!

I have a day dream. No matter how little money I can profit earn now. It is just enough for my life and study. Unable to buy things that I would think like. Facing these now... Again what then of it? I think I have to finish/complete them myself.

I have a day dream. I think that within three years' time, the first step of my life's goal will be realized. My belief and yearning will shall be the power of behind my persistance. I must do better best with all my strength.

Thanks for your correction.

As I suspected, I was on the target on the general feeling but wrong on the details.  Now that we have literal translation, we can start on the 2nd step in polishing.  This is where bilinguals can help you. Even the punctuation and structure are different both in Chinese and English. For example, Chinese don't have tenses but English does. The following is the literal translation according to your original structure.  It is okay in Chinese but in English, the punctuation is not acceptable.  A full stop is to end a sentence.  Chinese may favor phrases but English prefers complete sentences.  Sometimes, a phrase here and there is okay for it will make the piece more interesting.  Too many of these will make the English essay unnatural.  So the first step is to redo the punctuation and change the structure.

I Have a Dream This is okay but captialize all significant words in a title! 

I have a day dream, if you have a dream, you don't chase after it then you will never get it,

if you don't chase the thinking within your heart, you will never find the your real self, if you don't try new things, your life will become boring and stale.

I have a day dream. If you have a dream, you don't chase after it, then you will never get it. If you don't chase the thinking within your heart, you will never find your real self.  If you don't try new things, your life will become boring and stale.

I have a simple day dream, I think, go chase it.

I have a day dream, sometimes I too will feel perplexed, sometimes too, a ponderance if my insistence is correct, sometimes, I too would feel lonely and indifferent/unconcerned, facing these sort of things, then what, I think my life must experience/undergo these.

I have a day dream. Sometimes, I too will feel perplexed.  Sometimes too, a ponderance if my insistence is correct.  Sometimes, I too would feel lonely and indifferent/unconcerned.  Facing these sort of things... Then what? I think my life must experience/undergo these.

I have a day dream, I think I have to finish/complete them myself, thus/hence, I left my family, my old friends, come to a strange city all because of my earlier insistence, facing these, again, what then, I think I have to finish/complete them myself!

I have a day dream.  I think I have to finish/complete them myself.  Thus/hence, I left my family, my old friends.  Come to a strange city because of my earlier insistence.  Facing these again... What then? I think I have to finish/complete them myself!

I have a day dream, no matter how little money I can profit now, just enough for my life and study,

Unable to buy things I would think of, facing these now, again what then, I think I have to finish/complete them myself!

I have a day dream. No matter how little money I can profit now. Just enough for my life and study. Unable to buy things I would think.  Facing these now... Again what then? I think I have to finish/complete them myself.

I have a day dream, I think within three years' time, the first step of my life's goal will be realized,

my belief and yearning will be the power of my persistance, I must do better with all my strength.

I have a day dream. I think within three years' time, the first step of my life's goal will be realized. My belief and yearning will be the power of my persistance.  I must do better with all my strength.

Thanks for your correction.

In learning a language, especially if you are an adult, translation is the best way to learn a language.  You have enough mature thoughts in your native language but don't have the necessary advance vocabulary or idioms to make it work in the target language.  

There are at least 3 steps to accomplish this.  First, a literal translation which I am going to show you below. Usually, this would give you a general idea.  The 2nd step is to polish it.  Here we can help you, for example, the correct order of words or choice of words used to sound better in the target language.

The last step is to further polish the finer points in your writing.  For example, in the area of idioms.  Depending on the audience you are going to convey, you cannot just translate, "Rome was not built in one day" as 羅馬非一曰之建立 but as 冰凍三尺, 非一日之寒.  In this case, there may be English influence on the language and you would understand.  Take a more complicated example, "The flesh is willing but the flesh is weak".  You definitely cannot translate it as, "氣毅体弱" (breath resolute, body weak) but as 一厢情愿.

我有一个梦想

I have a day dream.

如果你有梦，

If you have a dream,

你不去追求，

you don't chase after it

那你永远都不会得到

then you will never get it.

如果你不去追求内心的想法，

if you don't chase the thinking within your heart,

你永远无法找到正真得自我，

You will never find the my real self

你如果不去尝试新的事物，

If you don't try new things,

你的生活也会淡然无味。

Your life will become boring and stale.

我有一个简单的梦想，

I have a simple day dream.

我想，I think

去追求！Go chase it.

我有一个梦想，I have a day dream.

有时候我也会感觉到迷茫，

Sometimes I too will feel perlexed.

有时候也会思考自己坚持的是不是正确的，

Sometimes too, a ponderance if my insistence is correct.

有时我也会感受到孤独和冷漠，

Sometimes, I too would feel lonely and indifferent/unconcerned.

面对这些种种，

Facing these sort of things

那又怎样，Then what

我想我的人生必须经历这些。

I think my life must experience/undergo these.

我有一个梦想，I have a day dream.

我想去亲自去完成它，I think I have to finish/complete them myself.

为此，Thus/hence

我离开了我的家人，I left my family

我的老朋友们，My old friends,

来到到一个陌生的城市只为了当初的执着，

Come to a strange city, all because of my earlier insistence.

面对这些，Facing these,

那又怎样，Again, what then

我想我的人生必须经历这些！

I think I have to finish/complete them myself.

我有一个梦想，I have a day dream

尽管我现在赚的钱并不多，No matter how little money I can profit now

仅够我的生活和学习，Just enough for my life and study.

不能买太多我想要的东西，Unable to buy things I would think of.

面对现在的这些，Facing these now.

那又怎样，Again what then

我想我的人生必须经历这些！I think I have to finish/complete them myself.

我有一个梦想，I have a day dream

我想在三年的时间里实现我人生目标的第一步。

I think within three years' time, the first step of my life's goal will be realized.

我的信仰与信念是让我坚持下去的动力，

My belief and yearning will be the power of my persistance. 

我将尽力做得更好！I must do better with all my strength.

谢谢你的修改！Thanks for your correction.