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Scary earthquake this morning in China There was an earthquake clothes to Chengdu in Schuan province in China 13 hours ago. It was very strong, 7.0. It was scary. A lot of people ran out of the appartment with bedgown. The earthquake stoped when I ran to the door of the appartment. Then I hesitated if I should continue escaping or stop? But I still ran down to the ground when I saw a lot of person running down to the ground. I was so stupid that I spent 3 seconds looking for my shoes when the building was shaking. Thank god I am ok. As reported, 156 persons died till now. And more than 5000 persons got injured. Bless for all those unlucky people.

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Scary earthquake this morning in China

There was an earthquake clothes to Chengdu in Schuan province in China 13 hours ago. It was very strong, 7.0.
It was scary. A lot of people ran out of the appartment in their bedgown.
The earthquake stoped when I ran to the door of the apartment. Then, I hesitated to decide if I should continue escaping or stop? But I still ran down to the street when I saw a lot of persons running down to the street.


I was so stupid that I spent 3 seconds looking for my shoes when the building was shaking. Thank God I am ok.

As reported, 156 persons have died so far, and more than 5000 persons were injured. Bless for all those unlucky people.

 

[Good work.  In many of my corrections, you were not incorrect, but there was simply a more common way to say it.  For instance, we say 'running out to the street' instead of 'ground'.  Also, if you a speaking of a specific god, the 'God' is capitalized, sinced it considered a name.  I'm glad you're OK.]

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It s a very pity what happened i China,, I ve heard the news on TV. The earthquakes threaten me as well. We also live in seismically active zone,,, I know your pain and sorrow,,,, In 1988 , there was a huge earthquake in Armenia , when 25000 people were died..It was marked amount for our country,,,,,i wish there would never be earthquakes.....:((((((((

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