Corrections · 2
Scary earthquake this morning in China
There was an earthquake clothes to Chengdu in Schuan province in China 13 hours ago. It was very strong, 7.0.
It was scary. A lot of people ran out of the appartment in their bedgown.
The earthquake stoped when I ran to the door of the apartment. Then, I hesitated to decide if I should continue escaping or stop? But I still ran down to the street when I saw a lot of persons running down to the street.
I was so stupid that I spent 3 seconds looking for my shoes when the building was shaking. Thank God I am ok.
As reported, 156 persons have died so far, and more than 5000 persons were injured. Bless for all those unlucky people.
[Good work. In many of my corrections, you were not incorrect, but there was simply a more common way to say it. For instance, we say 'running out to the street' instead of 'ground'. Also, if you a speaking of a specific god, the 'God' is capitalized, sinced it considered a name. I'm glad you're OK.]
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