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A greeting to all friends.  appreciate I would be most grateful if you could help me with this English work. To invent some festivities. I leave the text:

The Nocaima-Cundinamarca Parties

The Nocaima-Cundinamarca parties are very happy festive and almost 80% of the town's people are involved. [For better writing, you should give an introduction to what these are.  It is not as well known as 4th of July etc.  At least give a link to it.]in them, There are be games, dances, concerts and foreign artists that performing different shows for the general public.

people really enjoy the holidays and feel much commitment since they come from a tradition of over 200 years. For over two hundred years, they are immensely popular and celebrated. These festivals are celebrated every year on September 7. All persons [of course they are people.  We don't expect anything else] attending the parties are dressed up as clowns, harlequins, mimes, or jesters. as This is a prerequisite to if you want to attend the celebrations. Some of the highlights are Its principal activities are the Ugly [or you can say, "Ugly of the Uglies"] iest Parades, it is also the most the Fattest of the Fat Reign and perform a Dwarf Race where the winner receives a pair of stilts as a reward, prize.  something that is also very characteristic of the Like most parties of revelry, is that people Nocaima Chicha everyone gets drunk from corn. (alcohol derived primarily from corn fermentation distilled not), this makes them get a little crazy and disoriented resulting in the end of the holidays great To be sure, fights that are very funny for people who are not from the region, but who come to participate in these festivities will break out by the end of the festivities, much to the delight of the non-local participants. Meals consumed during The festival festive foods are not very common, among its main dishes are the run-of-the-mill kinds.  For example, curried kidneys, legs caramel legs [specify the animal], roasted chicken hearts, root broth made from roots [great if you can identify what kind] and, chocolate coated [give the name of the animals] eyes.

Nocaima parties are known throughout Colombia. They are  for being a true taste of local and native tradition where reality and fantasy are mixed  in which the mixing of the Colombian people gathers in a big party where reality fun and laughs and is transformed through the magic of dance, disguise the word, riddles, poetry and music.

The ingenuity, imagination, color and the luxury lavishness of the costumes boggles the mind.  make this Sunday an act artistic campaign very special, it is the result of two years of preparation looking to keep alive the tradition of a town that lives and vibrates to the beat of its Carnival. This Sunday of celebration will once more test the inventiveness and ingenuity of us all in keeping the tradition of this town.  The carnival is truly the beat and pulse of a wonderful tradition.

Please help me with this English activity

A greeting to all friends, appreciate you could help me with this English work. To invent some festivities. I leave the text:

The Nocaima-Cundinamarca parties

The Nocaima-Cundinamarca parties are very festive, and almost 80% of the people are involved in them. There are games, dances, concerts, and foreign artists that perform different shows for the general public. People really enjoy the holidays and feel a great commitment to them, since they come from a tradition of over 200 years. These festivals are celebrated every year on September 7. All the people attending the party are dressed as clowns, harlequins, mimes, and jesters, as this is a prerequisite to attend the celebration. Its principal activities are the ugliest parades, with the fattest person reigning. There is a dwarf race where the winner receives stilts as a reward. Something else that is also very characteristic of the parties is that people of Nocaima Chicha get drunk from alcohol derived primarily from corn fermentation not distilled. This makes them become a little crazy and disoriented, resulting in the end of the holidays with great fights. These fights are very funny for people who are not from the region, but who come to participate in these festivities. Meals consumed during the festival are not very common. For example, among its main dishes are curried kidneys, legs caramel, roasted chicken hearts, root broth, and chocolate eyes. Nocaima parties are known throughout Colombia for being a true taste of tradition in which the mixing of the Colombian people takes place. They gather in a big party where reality meets fun and laughter, and all of it is transformed by the magic of dance, disguises, poetry, and music. The ingenuity, imagination, and color of the luxurious costumes make this Sunday an act of an artistic campaign very special. It is the result of two years of preparation looking to keep alive the tradition of a town that lives and vibrates to the beat of its Carnival.