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My Family A poor rural area, where I have growed up and lived 24 years at least; and my little family, they are my dad, mom, and little brother Feng. my parents did farm work every day and night, Feng and me always did farm work after school.

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My Family

 

A poor rural area is where I have growed grew up; and lived for twenty-four 24 years at the least.
and My little family, they are my dad, my mom, and little brother Feng.
mMy parents did farmed work every day and night. Little brother Feng and me I always did at farming work after school.

 

I don't know if you are writing poetry or just prose.  If it is poetry, it is excellent except that you have to indent the following way.

 

A poor rural area

Is where I grew up.

For twenty-four years,

At the least.

 

My parents,

Farmed everyday and night.

Little Brother Feng and I,

Always at farming after school.

 

However, if you are writing prose, then I'm afraid that it is not how one should be writing.  Here's the prose form:

 

I grew up in a poor rural area for at least twenty-four years.  I have a small family, my father, my mother and my little brother, Feng.  My parents are farmers and they worked every day and night.  My little brother and I always help out on the farm after school.

 

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