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Poetry
I think poetry is the engine of the world. It’s a tool that allows us to transport us to a completely different world Consider not using world twice. In English, good writing usually attempts to avoid repetitive wording, especially when describing something as enchanting as poetry. Perhaps instead, to a completely different reality. Poetry makes us incredible beings, making us capable of creating new things through words. Poetry used to believe in life, in the smiles, hope, in the words, in dreams, in new ways. Poetry used to believe in life, in the smiles, hope, in the words, in dreams, in new ways. I like poetry because it's a very beautiful world where everything makes sense no matter how crazy it may seem.
Poetry
I think poetry is the engine of the world. It’s a tool that allows us to transports us to a completely different world . You may also say "...completely different reality." Poetry becomes transforms us into incredible beings that makes us capable of creating new things through words. Poetry used to makes us believe in life, in the smiles, hope, in the words, in dreams, and in new ways. We smile, hope and dream through potery. Poetry used to believe in life, in the smiles, hope, in the words, in dreams, in new ways. I took the liberty of splitting one sentence and deleting the redundant one. This way, it creates "drama" by creating a "cause and effect" scenario." I like poetry because it 's allows us to live in a very beautiful world where everything makes sense no matter how crazy it may seem.
I agree with the first commentator on his comment about redundancy. That being said, your command of written English is already strong. Not everyone would be willing to write about something so beautiful as poetry. -- RL
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