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learn English and trivia.
These days. I'm watching this video. to learn English.
It's easy for me.and very interesting . apparently ,It' s a children's TV show .
sometimes, I feel ashamed. I want to watch some films in English.and read books written in English.
but, This video I can learn the world culture. I suggest watching this video for learn English people and for trivia .
http://www.nhk.or.jp/prekiso/index.html
Learning English and trivia.
These days I'm watching this video to learn English.
It's easy for me and very interesting. Apparently, it's a children's TV show.
Sometimes, I feel ashamed. I want to watch films in English and read books written in English,
but with this video I can learn the world's cultures. I suggest watching this video to learn about English people and English trivia.
http://www.nhk.or.jp/prekiso/index.html
Learn English and Trivia.
These days, I'm watching this video to learn English.
It's easy for me. and very interesting. Apparently, it's a children's TV show.
Sometimes, I feel ashamed. I want to watch some films in English. and read books written in English.
But, from this video I can learn the world's culture. I suggest watching this video to learn English people and for trivia.
http://www.nhk.or.jp/prekiso/index.html
.. this video... is ok, but maybe "a video" would be better, as they don;t yet know which is "this" video.
I have changed many commas & full stops.
.. learn the world's culture.. sounds like all the world's culture.
"learn about the cultures of the world" might work even better.
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Hope it helps
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