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Applying for a job
I recently saw a job offer from XX Hospital, and I would like to apply for this job.
Now, I am currently studying for a Masters degree in public health, but although I have been working in urgencies emergency rooms for all my entire career.
Moreover, In addition, I am also learning English to improve my ability to communicate and help foreign English speaking patients. skills and have a good english level.
I am enclosing my CV which will provide you with for more information regarding my abilities which I feel would be a major asset to your hospital.
Yours faithfully
Sincerely,
What else could I add in this text asking for a job? Are Is there anything wrong with it? I always want it to be being very formal and polite.
Well done César! I hope my changes help you with your job search. Best of luck!
Applying for a job
Mr. XX/Ms. XX,
Greetings! I recently saw a job offer from your Hospital, and I would like to apply for this job.
Now, I am taking up a masters in public health, and I know that I am capable of doing the job.
Moreover, I am learning english to improve my communicative skills. and have a good english level.
I am willing to have an interview to anytime that you are comfortable.
I enclose my CV for more information.
Yours truly,
Mr. Your Name
What could I add in this text asking for a job? Are there anything wrong? Always being very formal and polite.
Add these following information:
-brief self introduction (full name and age)
-your purpose why you want to have that job;
-your work experiences;
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Application Letter:
Mr. XX/Ms. XX,
Greetings! I recently saw a job offer from your Hospital, and I would like to apply for this job. Now, I am taking up a Masters in Public Health, and I know that I am capable of doing the job. Moreover, I am learning english to improve my communicative skills. and have a good english level.
I am willing to have an interview to anytime that you are comfortable.
I enclose my CV for more information.
Yours truly,
Mr. Your Name
What could I add in this text asking for a job? Are there anything wrong? Always being very formal and polite.
Add these following information:
-brief self introduction (full name and age)
-your purpose why you want to have that job;
-your work experiences;
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