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Applying for a job I recently saw a job offer from XX Hospital, and I would like to apply for this job. Now, I am studying a master in public health, but I have been working in urgencies all my career. Moreover, I am learning english to improve my skills and have a good english level. I enclose my cv for more information. Yours faithfully What could I add in this text asking for a job? Are there anything wrong? Always being very formal and polite.

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Applying for a job

I recently saw a job offer from XX Hospital, and I would like to apply for this job.
Now, I am currently studying for a Masters degree in public health, but although I have been working in urgencies emergency rooms for all my entire career.
Moreover, In addition, I am also learning English to improve my ability to communicate and help foreign English speaking patients.   skills and have a good english level.

I am enclosing  my CV which will provide you with for more information regarding my abilities which I feel would be a major asset to your hospital.  

Yours faithfully
Sincerely,
What else could I add in this text asking for a job? Are Is there anything wrong with it?  I always want it to be being very formal and polite.

Well done César!  I hope my changes help you with your job search.  Best of luck!

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Applying for a job

 

Mr. XX/Ms. XX,

 

      Greetings! I recently saw a job offer from your Hospital, and I would like to apply for this job.
Now, I am taking up a masters in public health, and I know that I am capable of doing the job.
Moreover, I am learning english to improve my communicative skills. and have a good english level.

 

      I am willing to have an interview to anytime that you are comfortable.


      I enclose my CV for more information.

                                                                                             Yours truly,

                                                                                              Mr. Your Name


What could I add in this text asking for a job? Are there anything wrong? Always being very formal and polite.

 

Add these following information:

-brief self introduction (full name and age)

-your purpose why you want to have that job;

-your work experiences;

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I wish you the best of luck in your job search :)
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Application Letter:

 

Mr. XX/Ms. XX,

 

      Greetings! I recently saw a job offer from your Hospital, and I would like to apply for this job. Now, I am taking up a Masters in Public Health, and I know that I am capable of doing the job. Moreover, I am learning english to improve my communicative skills. and have a good english level.

      I am willing to have an interview to anytime that you are comfortable.

      I enclose my CV for more information.

 

                                                                                              Yours truly,
                                                                                              Mr. Your Name

 

What could I add in this text asking for a job? Are there anything wrong? Always being very formal and polite.

 

Add these following information:
-brief self introduction (full name and age)
-your purpose why you want to have that job;
-your work experiences;

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