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Introducing myself
This is my first composition on italki.
I am a 20 year-old college student in Chengdu, Sichuan, province of China [I prefer, "Chengdu, provincal capital of the Sichuan Province in China"]. I am learning English from since middle school but still not good at in it. I want to improve my English and so I am came here. and At the same time, I also want to make friends from all over the world. My hometown, Chengdu is far from the coastal cities, so and I have never went been to Beijing or Shanghai before. Maybe Perhaps when I graduate, from college I will may be able to travel some big cities of in China.__I also want to travel abroad. I want to go to Morocco, since I got have a good griend there.__I want to visit USA,.the UK,_Germany,_and many other countries, if it is possible too. [What you wrote is not wrong but the sentence structure is so used often that it becomes boring.] There is no snow in Chengdu has no snow in during winter, and so I want to go somewhere with where snow falls during winter.world, maybe Northern Europe will be a good start.
When I am free,I like watching movies,_listening to music and like has interest in many others activities. I like English songs.__I also like pop and country music. I like Very much into K-pop, a lot. I like TVXQ,_SNSD,_Taylor Swift,_Westlife......I like Watching tennis games, and soccer games. is also a passion. Lina LINA, the professional Chinese tennis player of CHINA, she is my super idol star.__I hope that you know of her and love like her.
This is me, I hope that you can correct my mistakes.__Thanks! 谢谢!
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Introduce myself
This is my first composition on italki.
I am a 20-year-old college student in Chengdu, located within the Sichuan province of China. I learnhave studied English fromsince middle school but I'm still not very good at it. I wanted to improve my English so i came here, and i also wanted to make friends from all over the world. My hometown, Chengdu, is far from the coastal cities, so I have never wentbeen to Beijing or Shanghai before. Maybe when i graduate from college i will travel to some big cities ofin China. I also want to travel abroad. I want to go to Morocco. I got a good gfriend there,I want to visit the USA, the UK,Germany,and many other countries. Chengdu has no snow in winter, so i want to go somewhere with snow world, like maybe Northern Europe.
When I am have free time,I like watching movies,listening to music (like many others). I like English songs and I like pop and country music. I like kpop a lot. I like TVXQ,SNSD,Taylor swift,Westlife......I like watching tennis games, and soccer games. LINA, professional tennis player of CHINA, she is my super star.I hope you know her and love her. ThisThat is me, hope you can correct my mistakes.Thanks!谢谢
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