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Recycling
I like to recycle. I keep paper, glass, plastic and cartons from milk, juice, etc. in a special place at home and every morning, before I leave for work, I take it to a special spot. There are big bins (in the place/there); each of them is used for a certain type of recyclable items:
Blue bin – paper;
yellow bin – plastic;
white and green bins –glass (white class or colored glass);
orange bin – cartons.
I usually bring (all things/everything) in one bag and sort them there and as I throw them into the each bin. or "I usually bring everything in one bag and sort them into each bin."
I’m annoyed when I see people (who don’t recycle at all/who never recycle). I don’t understand (why they’re so disregardful and careless/why they disregard and are so careless) about our environment.
Recycling
I like to recycle. I keep papers, glasses, plastics, juice and milk cartons in a special area at home and every morning, before I leave for work, I take it to a special area. There are big bins in that area; each of them is used for a certain type of recycling items, such as: blue bin for papers; yellow bin for plastics; white and green bins for glasses (clear glasses or tinted glasses); and orange bin for cartons.
I usually bring all of these things in one garbage bag, sort them there and throw them into its designated bin.
It annoys me when I see people who do not know how to recycle at all. I do not understand why they’re very disregardful and careless careless about our environment.
NOTE:
-observe parallelism in your narrations and examples
glasses, papers, and plastics.
glass, paper, and plastic.
-avoid putting harsh words.
-if you will use "so", it should be followed by its reason.
Well, english is not my native language. I may also have errors.
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