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a letter to explain the market figures
hi xx:
Hope you're well too. Hope you are all fine.
I am sorry for the figures. I feel sorry for the figures.
The sales down 30% on last year, the market is generally flat .The sales declined 30% in the last year.
There are some reason can explain this situation:There are few reasons which can explain this situation.
firstly,new ikea store opened near Copenhagen;Firstly the new IKEA store opened near Copenhagen.
secondly,we have no danish brochures,Secondly we have no danish brochures
the last but not the least important,biggest customer who want to more commission 25% has frozen orders. and finally, the big dealers expecting more commission of 25% has frozen orders.
But there were still some good news.there are good-signs of recovery in consumer confidence;and there are possible contract with big hotel chain refurnishing twelve hotels.Hope still there's good news that there are goood signs of recovery in consumer and possibly a contract with big chain of 12 hotels of refurnishing.
I have some recommendation for this:get danish brochures out,increase commissions across the board;more advertising ,eg articles in lifestyle magazines. I have some suggestions to get improved like printing danish brochures, increase commissions across the board, more advertising through articles in lifestyle magazines.
If you have any questions ,feel free to ask me . Any quiries u r welcome please!
Hope you're well too.
I am sorry for the figures. I'm sorry about the figures.
The sales down 30% on last year, the market is generally flat. Sales are down 30% compared to last year (and/because) the market is generally flat at the moment.
There are some reason can explain this situation: firstly,new ikea store opened near Copenhagen;secondly,we have no danish brochures,the last but not the least important,biggest customer who want to more commission 25% has frozen orders. There are a few reasons which help to explain this situation: firstly, a new Ikea store opened near Copenhagen, secondly, we have no Danish brochures, and last but not least, our biggest customers have frozen all orders. (Sorry I am not quite sure what you are talking about with the 25% commission, tell me the Chinese).
But there were still some good news.there are good-signs of recovery in consumer confidence;and there are possible contract with big hotel chain refurnishing twelve hotels. But there is still some good news, there are signs of a recovery in consumer confidence, there is also a potential contract available with a large hotel chain to refurbish twelve hotels.
I have some recommendation for this:get danish brochures out,increase commissions across the board;more advertising ,eg articles in lifestyle magazines. I have some recommendations; get the Danish brochures out, increase commissions across the board, advertise more e.g. put some articles in lifestyle magazines.
If you have any questions ,feel free to ask me . If you have any questions, please feel free to ask.
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