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Correct please. I think it's important for people to be kind to other people. Surely, most people don't like the people who does wrong or commits crime without compunction and like people whose character is kind. I think what is important for people is not how level of the university or high school he or she graduated. In fact , some doctors (they graduated the university whose level is very high) in Japan says their critical patients will not recover and should die. it's very unpleasant isn't it? At any way, I think what is important is dependent on his or her character.

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Could you correct my writing, please?

I think it's important for people to be kind to other people.

>I think it is important for people to be kind to other people.


Surely, most people don't like people who does wrong or commits crime

without compunction andlike people whose character is kind.

>I surely think that most people don't like the peopel who do wrong or commit a crime

>without compunction and they like kind people.

 

>I've heard that some doctors (with high academic background) in Japan said that their terminal patients would not recover anymore and had to die.

Can you believe that?

>I think the most important thing for us is not academic background.

At any way, I think what is important is dependent on his or her character.

>At any time, we should have a noble character and be kind to other people.

Thank you for listening.(reading)

 

In fact , some doctors (they graduated the university whose level is very high) in Japan says their critical patients will not recover and should die. it's very unpleasant isn't it?

I think what is important for people is not how level of the university or high school he or she graduated.

At any way, I think what is important is dependent on his or her character.

 

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语言有点混乱。不过也能理解你所表达的意思。 我说中文你作为日本友人应该能看懂吧

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