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correction
suggestion
Awful weather, awful activities...
Usually I don't have time for anything and now I don't know what to do in my short vacation. This fact has kind of made me realize that I don't do anything interesting, or for myself. The ice skating rink has been closed, so my new favourite hobby has to wait. What else should can I do now? I could read, go out with my friends or, watch a movie, or listen __ music (everything all of this in my garden yard or out of it; I love the ordinary most springs, but this one needs to show us how mean and ruthless it can be). But because it seems that the weather hates me so much, I could stay home and resume or, as well I can say, start learning Japanese. I borrowed a nice book from the library and I thought it would be great if I try to learn by myself (is that an if clause? it's not really a condition here...).
...if I tried to...
...if I could try to...
...to try to...
It's not an unreal conditional if it was a determined decision, but "would" is also a sort of past tense for "will". "It will be great if I try..." could become "I thought it would be great if I tried..."
I must admit, like any other person from italki, that I do not like either the changes made here either. :o3
Do you know what word goes in the blank? :)
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