IELTS-10
Title: Often new commercial center4s are planed with respect to green areas and sport facilities. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Why?
Some people believe that green areas and sport facilities should be considered while constructing new commercial centers. I do agree with this statement and will outline my reasons below.
Such practice is beneficial for the residents around as well as the people working in the office blocks. The fundamental reason lies in that green lawns enable people feel refreshed and invigorated not only because they could generate fresh air for people to breathe but also their beautiful scenery. People are more likely to work in high efficiency when they notice the gorgeous view through the window now and then. Similarly, it is inevitable that people would concentrate more on their work if they could stretch out themselves using the sport facilities during the break period. Thus, it is quite necessary to take the green area and sports facility into account when planning new commercial centers.
On the other hand, not everyone is positive about the statement. Some people feel that green area and sport facilities would take up a large share of the limited land resources in urban areas. They might be justified to some extent. After all, every inch of the precious land in cities, especially in metropolitan areas should be utilized. However, in fact, green area and sport facilities will not take up too much space, and what is more important is that they are human-oriented.
Therefore, considering the benefits such practice could bring, I believe that space for green area and sport facilities should be planned before constructing new commercial centers.
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in the first paragraph, what phrase could i use to replace "with respect to" ?does it mean 与...有关?
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