Perhaps we should do as well!
Today it is sunny. I draw the curtain to let the light come in the room and lighten everywhere. Early in the morning, the light hurts the eyes. But who cares? It is the beginning of the spring and no one wants to miss the morning’s light.
Birds are singing in the yard. You could say they feel lovely when they see the sun shining in the sky. You need not to look outside or watch your clock when you are asleep. Their songs timely inform starting the day. Then you say to yourself: why am I still asleep? Cool breeze is blowing everywhere; sparrows are singing and the sun might take away her light from here. I should wake up and do something interesting. Today is another day and I am ready to see what it has for me.
We have made some changes to our yard this year. We had an old water tanker with tall legs that was leaning. Its four legs were sent to the earth for about fifty centimeters and their surroundings were covered with concrete. Yet, now, after about twenty years of its construction, the soil around its legs were washed out and it was going to be concerning. We cut its legs and put it in the backyard on the ground. It means now we have more area to plant flowers or even some vegetables. It is fabulous to take your vegetables from the yard for your meals. My mother prepared the ground for vegetable bed. She wants to plant parsley; it is considered a vigorous plant that tolerates cold weather very well. She could not disregard cress; although it is a fragile plant. She also planted other herbs like dill and radish. You cannot see any trace of them though since their seeds are still in the ground. Imagination of the garden in about one month makes me smile. I bet it would be really beautiful.
God resurrects the whole world every spring and gave them another chance to live. He is not still disappointed from human being. Perhaps we should do as well!
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Perhaps we should do as well!
It's sunny today. I drew the curtain to let the light come in the room to brighten the place. Early in the morning, the light hurts the eyes. But who cares? It is the beginning of Spring and no one wants to miss the morning’s light.
Birds are singing in the yard. You could say they feel lovely when they see the sun shining in the sky. You need not look outside or watch your clock when you are asleep; their songs herald the start of the day. Then you say to yourself, "why am I still asleep? The cool breeze is blowing everywhere, sparrows are singing and the Sun might take away her light from here. I should wake up and do something interesting". Today is another day and I am ready to see what it has for me.
We have made some changes to our yard this year. We had an old water tanker with tall legs that was leaning. Its four legs were fifty centimetres deep in the earth and their surroundings were covered with concrete. Yet now, after about twenty years of its construction, the soil around its legs were washed out which became a great deal of concern . We cut its legs and put it in the backyard on the ground. It now means that we have more area to plant flowers or even some vegetables. It is fabulous to take your vegetables from the yard for your meals. My mother prepared the ground for vegetable bed. She wants to plant parsley; it is considered a vigorous plant that tolerates cold weather very well. She could not disregard cress; although it is a fragile plant. She also planted other herbs like dill and radish. You cannot see any trace of them though since their seeds are still in the ground. Imagination of what the garden would be like in one month makes me smile. I bet it would be really beautiful.
God resurrects the whole world every spring and gave them another chance to live. He is not still disappointed from human being. Perhaps we should do as well!
very good overall just added some words to strengthen your note I didn't understand your last 2 sentences that are highlighted did you mean "he is not disappointed with human beings"
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Thank you @Ebti! It's kind of you to put your comment here.
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so nice !
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We have milder winters but the similar summers. And thank you for correcting my sentence. It's indeed helpful.
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New Jersey is classified as a temperate zone, but winters here can be harsh (around 15 degrees Fahrenheit sometimes.) and summers hot (extended periods of temperatures into the nineties are common.) ".....in summer they feed off of what fruit remains on the fruit trees....". That's how I would word it.
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