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Meeting a net fraud(1) Meeting a net fraud(1) (遭遇网络诈骗)   Recently I often chat with foreign friends, I teach them Chinese and they help me improve my English, they are all kindness!   But one day, just I wanted to chat with foreigner, a girl who comes from an African country, calls herself as Abby said hello to me. I looked at her profile: Can speak English, studying German at present. “Nice to meet you”, I said. “Will you help me improve my English? But I don’t know how can I help you, I can’t speak German, I can only help you learn Chinese.   A few days late, Abby sent me a message. She said: she wants to make good friends with me and she requests to exchange photo with me. I said: I am willing to help you study Chinese, will you help me study English? I don’t say another words and don’t exchange photo with her.   Two days later, the network told me that Abby sent me a letter. In the letter Abbey told me that her families were killed in the civil war, only she is still alive, she lives in the camp. She only told me the secret that her late father was the Ministry of Mineral and Golden who has deposited about 6 million US dol1ars below her name. She asked me to keep the secret for her, otherwise she will be killed and the money will be lost if others know the secret. She said I am the only one who can help her in the world. She asked me help her to transfer the money, she wants to transfer the money to my account and she will come to China to see and thank me. At first, I should pay the money of the plane tickets and other free of commutable. She will return the money and thank me when she comes to China.   Oh my God, I meet a fraud! She wants to cheat my money! I immediately remove Abbey from my net page. She can’t contact me at all from this time!   In here I want to tell the fraud, I am a proletarian, I almost have no money, you cheat me no using at all!

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Meeting a net fraud(1)

Meeting a net fraud(1)
(遭遇网络诈骗)

  Recently I often chat with foreign friends where i teach them Chinese and they help me improve my English. Everyone i talk to is very kind! 
  But one day i just wanted to chat with a foreigner, a girl from an African country who calls herself "Abby" said hello to me. I looked at her profile: Can speak English, studying German at present. “Nice to meet you”, I said. “Will you help me improve my English? But I don’t know how can I help you, I can’t speak German, I can only help you learn Chinese.
  A few days later Abby sent me a message. She said she wants to become good friends with me and she requests to exchange a photo with me. I said i am willing to help you study Chinese, will you help me study English? I didn't say anything else and didn't end up exchanging a photo with her.
  Two days later, the network told me that Abby sent me a letter. In the letter Abbey told me that her families were killed in the civil war, only she is still alive, she lives in a camp. She only told me the secret that her late father was the Ministry of Mineral and Golden who has deposited about 6 million US dollars under her name. She asked me to keep the secret for her, otherwise she will be killed and the money will be lost if others know the secret. She said I am the only one who can help her in the world. She asked me to help her to transfer the money, she wanted to transfer the money to my account and she will come to China to see and thank me. At first, I should pay the money of the plane tickets and some other expenses. She will return the money and thank me when she comes to China.
  Oh my God, I met a fraud! She wanted to cheat me of money! I immediately removed Abbey from my net page. She can’t contact me ever again!
  In this entry i want to tell the fraud, i am a proletarian, I almost have no money, it's no use trying to cheat me!

 

ok only some small spelling and grammar mistakes, otherwise very good! :)

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Meeting a net fraud(1)

Meeting a net fraud(1)
(遭遇网络诈骗)

  Recently I often have been chatting frequently with foreign friends. I teach them Chinese and they help me improve my English.  They are all kindness so kind!
  But one day, just I just wanted to chat with foreigner. A girl who comes from an African country who called herself as Abby, said hello to me. I looked at her profile: Can speak English, studying German at present. “Nice to meet you”, I said. “Will you help me improve my English? But I don’t know how can I help you. I can’t speak German, I can only help you learn Chinese."
  A few days later, Abby sent me a message. She said she wanted to become good friends with me and she requested to exchange photos with me. I told her I was am willing to help her study Chinese, but also asked her if she would will you help me study English. I didn't say another word and didn't exchange a photo with her.
  Two days later, the network told me that Abby sent me a letter. In the letter Abbey told me that her family members were killed in a civil war, only she was the only one still alive and she now lived in a camp. She told only me the secret that her late father was the Ministry of Minerals and Gold who had

deposited about 6 million US dol1ars in her name. She asked me to keep the secret for her, otherwise she would be killed and the money would be taken away if others knew the secret. She insisted I was the only one in the world who could be of help. She asked if I would help her by transfering the money to my own account and then she would come to China to see me and thank me. But first I would have to purchase an airfare ticket for her. She said she would return the money and thank me when she arrives  in China.
  Oh my God, I met a fraud! She wanted to steal my money! I immediately removed Abbey from my net page. She won't be able to contact me ever again!
  Let this be a lesson about fraud! I am a proletarian, I almost have no money, so if you try to steal from me, you will get nothing! (I am not sure this is what you meant.)

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Meeting a net fraud(1)

Meeting a net fraud(1)
(遭遇网络诈骗)

  Recently I have been often chatting with foreign friends, I teach them Chinese and they help me improve my English, they are all kind!
  But one day,  I wanted to chat with foreigner, a girl who comes from an African country, calls herself Abby . She said hello to me. I looked at her profile: It said can speak English, studying German at present. “Nice to meet you”, I said. “Will you help me improve my English? But I don’t know how can I help you, I can’t speak German, I can only help you learn Chinese.
  A few days late, Abby sent me a message. She said: she wants to make good friends with me and she requests to exchange photo with me. I said: I am willing to help you study Chinese, will you help me study English? I didn’t say another word and didn’t exchange photos with her.
  Two days later, the network told me that Abby sent me a letter. In the letter Abbey told me that her family was killed in the civil war, and that only she is still alive, she lives in a camp. She only told me the secretand that her late father was working for the Ministry of Minerals and  Gold who has deposited about 6 million US dollars under her name. She asked me to keep the secret for her, otherwise she will be killed and the money will be lost if others get to know. She said I am the only one who can help her in the world. She asked me help her to transfer the money, she wanted to transfer the money to my account and said she will come to China to see me and thank me. At first, I should pay the money for the plane ticket and other frees for her commute. She will return the money and thank me when she comes to China.
  Oh my God, I met a fraud! She wanted to cheat off my money! I immediately removed Abbey from my net page. She can’t contact me at all from this time!
  I just wanted to tell the frauds, I am a proletarian, I am not thant rich, there is no point in you trying to cheat me at all!

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lily the phrase should be 'it's no use your trying to cheat me'
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Meeting a net fraud(1)

Meeting a net fraud(1)
(遭遇网络诈骗)

  Recently I often chat with foreign friends. I teach them Chinese and they help me improve my English, they are all kindness!
  But one day, I just wanted to chat with a foreigner. A girl who comes from an African country, and calls herself as Abby said hello to me. I looked at her profile: Can speak English, studying German at present. “Nice to meet you”, I said. “Will you help me improve my English? But I don’t know how can I can help you, I can’t speak German, I can only help you learn Chinese.
  A few days later, Abby sent me a message. She said: she wants to make good friends with me and she requests to exchange a photo with me. I said: I am willing to help you study Chinese, will you help me study English? I don’t say another word and don’t exchange photo with her.
  Two days later, the network told me that Abby sent me a letter. In the letter Abbey told me that her family was killed in the civil war, only she is the only one who still alive, she lives in the camp. She only told me the secret that her late father was the Ministry of Mineral and Golden who has deposited about 6 million US dol1ars below under her name. She asked me to keep the secret for her, otherwise she will be killed and the money will be lost if others know the secret. She said I am the only one who can help her in the world. She asked me to help her to transfer the money, she wants to transfer the money to my account and she will come to China to see and thank me. At first, I should pay the money of the plane tickets first and other free of commutable (not sure what that is). She will return the money and thank me when she comes to China.
  Oh my God, I meet a fraud! She wants to cheat my money! I immediately removed Abbey from my net page. She can’t contact me at all from this time on!
  In here I want to tell the fraud, I am a proletarian, I almost have no money, you cheat me no using at all! there's no use in trying to scam me

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