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a movie.
I watched a movie about Biggie Smalls and 2pac. I didn't even know that 2pac and Biggie Smalls had already died. Eventually I was crying near the end of the movie. Movies tell me somethings I didn't known. I'm not interested in rap or hip hop, but somehow, when I watched this movie, I was impressed by it, especially his (whose mother? "especially Biggie Small's mother, or 2pac's mother) mother.
a movie.
I watched the a movie which was a story about Biggie Smalls and 2Pac even though I didn't know that 2pac and him had already died. but I eventually I was crying when the movie is was about to end. movies tell me something I haven't known. (Maybe break this sentence up as it is a few different thoughts: I watched a movie which was a story about Biggie Smalls and 2Pac. Even though I didn't know that 2Pac and Biggie had already died I was eventually crying when the movie was about to end. Movies tell me some things which I haven't known before.) I'm not interested in rap or hip hop, but somehow I watched this movie and then I was impressed by it, especially his mother. (I'm not interested in rap or hip hop, but somehow when I watched this movie I was impressed by it, especially with his mother.)
Good Job. Watch your nationalizations and run on sentences.
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