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a movie. I watched the movie which story about Biggie smalls and 2pac even though I didn't know that 2pac and him had already died. but eventually I was crying when the movie is about to end. movies tell me something I haven't known. I'm not interested in rap or hip hop, but somehow I watched this movie and then I was impressed by it, especially his mother.

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a movie.

I watched a movie about Biggie Smalls and 2pac. I didn't even know that 2pac and Biggie Smalls had already died. Eventually I was crying near the end of the movie. Movies tell me somethings I didn't known. I'm not interested in rap or hip hop, but somehow, when I watched this movie, I was impressed by it, especially his (whose mother? "especially Biggie Small's mother, or 2pac's mother) mother.

 

 

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a movie.

I watched the a movie which was a story about Biggie Smalls and 2Pac even though I didn't know that 2pac and him had already died. but I eventually I was crying when the movie is was about to end. movies tell me something I haven't known. (Maybe break this sentence up as it is a few different thoughts:  I watched a movie which was a story about Biggie Smalls and 2Pac.  Even though I didn't know that 2Pac and Biggie had already died I was eventually crying when the movie was about to end.  Movies tell me some things which I haven't known before.)  I'm not interested in rap or hip hop, but somehow I watched this movie and then I was impressed by it, especially his mother. (I'm not interested in rap or hip hop, but somehow when I watched this movie I was impressed by it, especially with his mother.)

 

Good Job. Watch your nationalizations and run on sentences. 

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When Notorious B.I.G and 2Pac where alive, there was a rival between east coast and west coast hiphop. But when you get a chance to listen to Biggie Smalls music, they say he was one of the best hiphop artist of all time
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俺は元気、さおりさんは?And slang, yes. でも2pacはすげーな詩人。天才だぜ。君は歌詞をわからなくても聞いてみてよ、その音楽で何かを習うかも。それに、ネットで翻訳を見つけていい。And to add to Nick, "hip hop" and "rap" today I would not even call hip hop and rap.
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hey Nick. I like classics more than currently music too. should I learn slang? haha :P I'm sure if I could understand them, It would be more fun. but at first, I have to learn correctly English I guess :P thanks!

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