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The bad weather
It`s cold and wind blowing yesterday.but I wear little,I felt cold.I had a fever,to my surprise,the wind blowing made me walk.but today when I got up in the morning,I found the sunshine out of the windows,the sun is rising from the horizon of the sea.It made me very happy,I thought I can wear less.But to my anger,when I went out,the sunshine is warm, but the temperature is low.I had a fever.oh my god.
The bad weather
Yesterday, it was cold and windy. I wore little, and felt cold. I had a fever, and to my sursrise, the wind blowing made me walk. But today when I got up in the morning, I saw sunshine outside my windows; the sun was rising on the horizon across the sea. It made me very happy, and I thought that I could wear less. But to my frustration, when I went out, the sunshine was warm but the temperature was low. I had a fever. Oh my God.
*Always leave a space after every comma and period. Always capitalize the first word of every sentence. The word God is always capitialized when refering to the Christian deity.
*When talking about things that happened before, always use past tense. Present tense is only if you are describing exactly what you are doing at the very moment you are doing it.
The Bad Weather
It`s Yesterday, the weather was cold and the wind blew blowing yesterday.but I wear wore little and I felt cold.__I had a fever,to my surprise, walk in the wind blowing made me walk and not surprisingly, I got the chills. .but today However, when I got woke up in the this morning,_I found the plenty of sunshine outside. of the windows,the A gorgeous sun is rising from the ocean's horizon of the sea.__It This made me very happy.__I thought that I don't have to can wear less much but to my surprise, anger,when I went out,the sunshine is warm, but the temperature is not warm enough low.__And on top of this, I had still have a nagging fever.__oh my god Lordy Lord.
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