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Nowdays , i think my future . I go to work two days and two days i day off usually ( i think that it is not correct sentence), so i have not on weekend some time , i know that it is different another people , usually they goes to work on weekday and they does not go to work on weekend , besides (more over) my company have not special idea , so i consider my job and i think that change jobs.
From now , i am going to prepare to take a test named Engineer Information Processing. Actually i was failed two time it, i want to pass it next month.
Nowdays the spring have come to korea , i am changed my hair style and clothes style .
I hope that i climb on the mountain and i travel in my country .
From last week, worker's asset building savings came out , i want to join it but it have a lot of risk and type , i am confusing maybe sooner or late i will join it .
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English diary
Nowdays , i think about my future . I go to work two days and then have two days i day off usually ( I think that it is not correct sentence), so I do not have time on the weekend some time , I know that it is different another people. Usually, they go to work on weekdays and they do not go to work on weekend. Besides (more over), my company does not have any special ideas, so I am considering my job and I think that I want to change jobs.
Starting now, I am going to prepare to take a test named Engineer Information Processing. Actually, i was failed it two times, so I want to pass it next month.
Nowdays, the spring has come to Korea. I am changing my hair style and clothes style .
I hope that I will climb on the mountain and travel in my country .
From last week, worker's asset building savings came out. I want to join it, but it has a lot of risk and type , I am confused about whether I will joint it sooner or later.
Thank you for reading my English diary - I write once a week in my English diary .
[Basically good. Review the use of the verb 'have' and use shorter sentences. Also, leave a space after periods and commas, not before]
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뭔가 고쳐드리고 싶은 마음은 드는데 왠지 기니까 선뜻 시작이 안 되네요..ㅋㅋㅋ;;
일단 I was failed, I am changed. 요런 건 능동으로. I (have) failed. I changed my hair style.
본격 redrafting 시작!
Nowadays, I think about my future. I go to work two days, and I got two days off usually. So, I don't have a weekend free time as many other people do. They work in week days and don't on weekends. Besides(Moreover), my company doesn't have a specialty(?)/special idea...;;, so I am thinking about changing my job.
From now, I am going to prepare to take a test. Actually, I have failed twice and I want to pass it next month. These days, spring has come to Korea. I have changed my hair style and clothes. I hope to hike and travel around my country.
Last week, the workers' asset building savings came out, and I want to join it but it has a lot of risks and types. I am confused right now, but sooner or later I will join it.
제 멋대로 고쳐봤지만 좀 나아졌을거예요~
ESL 쌤들은 한국인들이 많이 쓰는 표현들 싫어하시더라고요. (Actually, So-so, From now on, In my case 이런 것들)
그리고 They don't./ The company has/ 이런 수 일치는 기본중에 기본!^^
Nowadays 가 맞고요, 두 번 쓰기 어색하니까 these days 도 써 봤습니다.
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