2) I'd like you to correct my English writing. I want to learn how to better express myself.

These days I often find public opinions deeply divided on the remarks or opinions posted on social network or blog sites. People who lead a never changing life never accept opinions different from thier own (1*). That’s why they often have an ill feeling towards others. There is something I want to ask these kind of people. If all the people were to think alike, would life be happier than before?


I would like to learn how to use better English expressions, so I hope you can help correct errors in my writing. Please..

1). You had "find" in the past tense when you are talking in the present. And I changed "a same life" to "a never changing life" for more than one reason. 1st reason is where I am from most people would not understand if you said "same life". They would ask "same compared to what?". And like Joey said "Set in their ways" is another way. The other ways you could say it is: "a life set in stone" "a flat life" and so on. 

Good job on this one.

2) I'd like you to correct my English writing. I want to learn how to better express myself.

These days I often found find public opinion is deeply divided on the remarks or opinions posted on social networks or and blog sites. People who are set in their wayslead the same live never accept opinions that different from their own one another. That’s why they often have an ill feeling towards others anyone else. There is something I want to ask the this kind of person people. If all the people were to think alike, would your life be happier than before?


I would like to learn how to use better English expressions, so I hope you can help correct errors in my writing. Please..

Good job.  One expression I interjected was to be "set in their ways".  You can also say "I am set in my ways".  It means stubborn and normally is used for an older person, but it is not reserved only for the elderly.  If you are interested in how to express certain things I can always help you.  This sayings can change from country to country and region to region, so you can learn some really interesting expressions from a multitude of people.

2) I'd like you to correct my English writing. I want to learn how to better express myself.

These days I often find public opinion deeply divided on the remarks or opinions posted on social network or blog sites. People who lead the same lives never accept opinions different from one another. That’s why they often have an ill feeling towards someone else. There is something I want to ask people like this. If all the people were to think alike, would life be happier than before?


I would like to learn how to use better English expressions, so I hope you can help correct errors in my writing. Please..

[Very good.  I use 'find' because it is something you did in the past and are doing now - and will probably do in the future.]