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EVERYBODY HAS THE SAME FEELING In the Christmas days, the streets are filled for many people they need to buy some presents for their family or friends or get some ingredients for their wonderful recipe. I see them and myself runing in the streets like a ants before the storm, and I allways have the same thought : we are in the same work. This sensation I only used to have in the Christmas but now this feeling frequently it´s come to me: Spanish people have the identical worry : what will happen in the future?

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EVERYBODY HAS THE SAME FEELING

In the Christmas days, During the Christmas season, this sounds better in English the streets are filled for with many people they who need to buy some presents for their family or friends or get some ingredients for their wonderful recipe.Christmas baking.  I see myself among them, and myself running in through the streets like a ants before the a storm, and I always have the same thought : we all think the same  are in the same work. I think this is what you were attempting to say: all people are thinking the same thing at the same time This sensation I used to only have this sensation only used to have in the during Christmas but now this feeling it frequently it´s comes to me: Spanish people have the identical a common just another way of expressing the same thing but it sounds better in English worry : what will happen in the future?

Well done!

I'm sorry that it took me so long to correct your composition but since Italki changed their format I find it difficult to notice new compositions from my friends.

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EVERYBODY HAS THE SAME FEELING

At Christmas time, the streets are filled with many people. They need to buy some presents for their family or friends or to get some ingredients for their wonderful recipe. I see them, along with myself, running in the streets like a ants before a storm, and I always have the same thought: we are in the same boat. I used to have this sensation only at Christmas time but now I have it more frequently. Spanish people have the same worry: what will happen in the future?

 

[This sensation I only used to have in the Christmas] = you've written [object][subject][verb]. This form can be used in English but it's not very common. It's better to use [subject][verb][object]. ie. "I used to have this sensation", "I have it more frequently", "Spanish people have the same worry".

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EVERYBODY HAS THE SAME FEELING

In the Christmas days, the streets are filled with many people because they need to buy some presents for their family or friends or get some ingredients for their wonderful recipe. I see them and myself runing in the streets like ants before the storm and I always have the same thought : we are engaged in the same work. This sensation I only used to have at Christmas, but now this feeling has more frequently it´s come to me: Spanish people have the identical worry : what will happen in the future?

 

[Good entry.  I read that things are pretty rough in Spain right now.  Good luck]

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