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My best friends Friendship is very important for everyone ,especially me.When I studying from primary school to collage ,I have lots of friends .Among thouse ,there are few friends who are my best friends.Now I would like to describe one of my best friends.His name is Pat.He has black hair and blue eyes. He is tall.He has a very beutiful smile.Hi is always good mood. He is generous to other people.Even when I angry with him.He hugs me and tells me"Don't worry be happy". I remember one situation when he waited for me for two hours and I forgot about our meeting.When I opened the door because somebody knocked on the door.I saw it was Pat.He was furious with me and he asked " Why didn't you came?" When I told him "Sorry I forgot" His face was red.He was confused this situation and he went to his house.Next two week he was offended at me but I bought two tickets to the cinema on his favourite movie.Finnaly we go together and we still are friends.

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My Best Friends

Friendship is very important for everyone, especially me. From primary school to collage, I made lots of friends. Among them, there are a who are my best friends. Now I would like to describe one of my best friends. His name is Pat. He has black hair and blue eyes. He is tall. He has a very beutiful smile. He is always in a good mood. He is generous to other people. Even when I am angry with him, he hugs me and tells me "don't worry, be happy". I remember one situation when he waited for me for two hours when I forgot about our meeting. When I opened the door because somebody knocked on the door, I saw it was Pat. He was furious with me and he asked "Why didn't you come?" When I told him "Sorry I forgot," his face was red. He was confused with the situation and he went home. For the next two weeks he was annoyed at me, but I bought two tickets to the cinema for his favourite movie. Finnaly, we went together and we are still friends.

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you are so lucky when you have a really bestfriend, keep claim and go on
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to college

Among those (or them), there are a few friends who are my best friends.

I would now like to describe one of my best friends.

He has a very beautiful smile.

He was confused about this situation... and he went to his house.

In the end (Finaly) we got together and we still are friends.

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Well done!
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nice article

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