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LİVİNG İN RURAL AREAS

Living in rural areas has more advantages than living in urban areas. First of all, [firstly] in a rural areas, the weather is cleaner than an urban area. Accordingly, if people live in a rural area they become healthier and the beautiful weather makes them more powerful. On the other hand, people who live in urban areas have stressful lives. For example, cities have a lot of traffic and disturbances. In addition, children who grow up in the fresh air are very intelligent and the fresh air calms them down. Besides, because of it's higher oxygen rate, people's senses are sharper.

The second reason is that living in a rural area costs more [less ??] than living an urban area. For instance, people who live in urban areas cannot produce their own food those who live in rural areas can easily do so. Besides, in rural areas, people help each other as they like cooparation.

People in rural areas, care for each other more, engendering cooperation.

Ceren, try not to start sentences with besides, it's not wrong, it just doesnt read very well, the same as, try not to start sentences with but.

In these areas, neighbourdhood relationships are more advanced and it makes people happy. The last reason is that rural areas are safer than urban areas. In these areas theft never [rarely] happens and people live in peace with each other. On the contrary, in cities there are more burglary crimes than villages.

tense 1. To sum up, [in summary] living in rural areas has a lot more advantages in every respect.

tense 2. To sum up, [in summary] living in rural areas is a lot more advantageous in every respect.

Pretty good english :)

I agree, living in the country is better. I moved to the country to raise my children, now they are grown of course, and I am back working in the city again :(