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我的动机力回来了!!
大家好!!
你们大致概不认识我。 两年以前面我开始学习汉语, 也我通经常使用 italki. 我努力及地学过,我学到了很多。
但第一次年后, 不知道为什么, 我听停止了努力学习。我试了整年, 一个星期我好好儿学习, 两个星期我不学习, 用英语说: one step forward and two steps back: 一个向前的步, 两个向后的步进一步退两步。
去年我吧没把汉语不忘了,不过它只是存活了留在记忆里。
今年我到底决定再努力学习,我希望我的汉语快快得地提高, 以便明年用汉语的本书我看得懂。
Hello everyone!
You probably don't know me. Two years ago I started studying Chinese, and I often used italki. I studied very hard, and I learnt a lot.
But after the first year, I don't know why, I stopped studying hard. I tried the whole year, studying very well for one week, not studying for two weeks, in English we say : one step forward and two steps back.
Last year I didn't forget Chinese, however it just survived.
This year I finally decided to study hard again, I hope my Chinese will improve quickly, so as to be able to read Chinese books next year.
我的动机回来了!!
大家好!!
你们大致可能不认识我。 两年以前面我开始学习汉语, 也我也经常使用 italki. 我努力及了学过,我很多学到了很多。
但第一次年后, 不知道为什么, 我听了停止了努力学习。整年我试试, 一个星期我好好儿学习, 两个星期我不学习, 用英语说: one step forward and two steps back: 一个向前的步, 两个向后的步。 向前一步,后退两步。
去年我吧把汉语不忘了,不过它又存活了。
今年我到底终于决定再努力学习,我希望我的汉语快快得提高, 以便明年用汉语写的本书我能看得懂。
Hello everyone!
You probably don't know me. Two years ago I started studying Chinese, and I often used italki. I studied very hard, and I learnt a lot.
But after the first year, I don't know why, I stopped studying hard. I tried the whole year, studying very well for one week, not studying for two weeks, in English we say : one step forward and two steps back.
Last year I didn't forget Chinese, however it just survived.
This year I finally decided to study hard again, I hope my Chinese will improve quickly, so as to be able to read Chinese books next year.
我的动机回来了!!
大家好!!
你们大致(大概)不认识我。 两年以前面(if you use 前面,it includes the location meaning. Such as, in the frount of. In this case, you are trying to say two years ago, so it will be 两年以前)我开始学习汉语, 也我通常使用 italki. 我努力及了学过(I’d like to say 我学习努力极了),我(学到了)很多学到了。(Words are correct. It just needs to reorganize)
但第一次年后(If you want to say it in a more native way, it will be:过了一年以后), 不知道为什么, 我听(停)了努力学习。整年我试试(我尝试了一整年), 一个星期我好好儿学习, 两个星期我不学习, 用英语说: one step forward and two steps back: 一个向前的步, 两个向后的步。
去年我吧汉语不忘了(我没有忘记汉语),不过它只存活了(一点)?I'm not sure about that。
今年我到底决定再努力学习,我希望我的汉语快快得提高, 以便明年用汉语的本书我看得懂汉语书。
Hello everyone!
You probably don't know me. Two years ago I started studying Chinese, and I often used italki. I studied very hard, and I learnt a lot.
But after the first year, I don't know why, I stopped studying hard. I tried the whole year, studying very well for one week, not studying for two weeks, in English we say : one step forward and two steps back.
Last year I didn't forget Chinese, however it just survived.
This year I finally decided to study hard again, I hope my Chinese will improve quickly, so as to be able to read Chinese books next year.
You will get it. Keep going!!
大家好!!
你们大致概不认识我。 两年以前面我开始学习汉语, 也我通常使用 italki. 我很努力地及了学习过,我很多学到了很多。
但第一次年后, 不知道为什么, 我听停止了努力学习。我尝试了整年我试试, 一个星期我好好地儿学习, 两个星期我不学习, 用英语说“one step forward and two steps back” 一个向前的一步, 两个向后退两的步。
去年我没把吧汉语不忘了,不过它只存在记忆里活了。
今年我到底决定再努力学习,我希望我的汉语水平能快快得提高, 以便明年用能看懂用汉语写的本书(本)我看得懂。
加油哦!
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