Cool Weather
Yesterday's weather is big sun,let a person feel very warm,have the feeling of Spring.But today is very cold,but also of the heavy rain.Lunch break at noon time ,lie pron on the table to a sleep for a while,after wake up feel especially cold.It feels like it in the ice fall into a sleep.So ,I took the cup after a cup of boiled water to drink,get better soon.
Perhaps is winter and spring in the fright,yesterday defeated the spring,winter come again.
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This is rather poetic so I might be able to convey the same intent in my correction.
Cool Weather
Yesterday's weather is big sun was very sunny and it made people let a person feel very warm, have the feeling of Spring and gave them that spring feeling. But today is very cold,but also of the heavy rain and it rains heavily.Lunch break at noon time ,lie pron lying on the table to a sleep for a while,after wake waking up feel feeling especially cold.It feels like it in the ice fall fell into a my sleep (do you mean snow?).So ,I took the drank cup after a cup of boiled water to drink, to get better soon.
Perhaps is winter and spring in the fright,yesterday defeated the spring,winter come again. winter and spring got into a fight and yesterday winter defated spring so winter comes again.
Good effort!
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This is rather poetic so I might be able to convey the same intent in my correction.
Cool Weather
Yesterday's weather is big sun was very sunny and it made people let a person feel very warm, have the feeling of Spring and gave them that spring feeling. But today is very cold,but also of the heavy rain and it rains heavily.Lunch break at noon time ,lie pron lying on the table to a sleep for a while,after wake waking up feel feeling especially cold.It feels like it in the ice fall fell into a my sleep (do you mean snow?).So ,I took the drank cup after a cup of boiled water to drink, to get better soon.
Perhaps is winter and spring in the fright,yesterday defeated the spring,winter come again. winter and spring got into a fight and yesterday winter defated spring so winter comes again.
Good effort!
0
This is rather poetic so I might be able to convey the same intent in my correction.
Cool Weather
Yesterday's weather is big sun was very sunny and it made people let a person feel very warm, have the feeling of Spring and gave them that spring feeling. But today is very cold,but also of the heavy rain and it rains heavily.Lunch break at noon time ,lie pron lying on the table to a sleep for a while,after wake waking up feel feeling especially cold.It feels like it in the ice fall fell into a my sleep (do you mean snow?).So ,I took the drank cup after a cup of boiled water to drink, to get better soon.
Perhaps is winter and spring in the fright,yesterday defeated the spring,winter come again. winter and spring got into a fight and yesterday winter defated spring so winter comes again.
Good effort!
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