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Pleass Bless Her

I have not learned English and or wrote written a diary entry for a long time, and finally I can write something today. My Spring Festival holiday was is over and during the holiday I helped my old classmate to be interviewed for a flight attendant job, like to  by buying formal clothes and toiletries, preparing the materials for her self-introduction, keeping her hair trimmed and helping her with her clothes when she was interviewing, before her interview, etc. She thinks that I have some experience because of I had a chance to be an airline stewardess. We went to Qingdao where she interviews for a week, and we almost tired out every day and we didn’t have time to walk around,. We waited until her she passed the preliminary examination, secondary examination and written examination, then we went back to Jinan. She is just waiting for the result and to be told whether she will go to Beijing for medical checks right now. I’m so nevers nervous, even more than her,. In fact, my old classmate wanted to be interviewed by international aviations because she thinks they have low requirements, but I suggested her that she to give up the idea,. She told me that if she doesn’t pass the domestic company's interview, then she would like to go to Guangzhou to be interviewed by an international airline next week. I wish her all the best and but I don’t want to go to Guangzhou next week, that’s so tired tiring, hahaha. :D

I hope her interview went well in the end! Your notebook entry was good and detailed :) But the main problem was that you made it sound like your friend was interviewing other people, rather than being interviewed herself. It sounded like she was interviewing people, when you meant people were interviewing her.

(I hope you find this helpful)

Pleass Please, Bless Pray for Her

I have not learned studied English and wrote written a diary for a long time. Finally, I can write something today.

My Spring Festival holiday was is over and during the holiday I helped my old classmate to get ready for an interview for a flight attendant job, like to buying formal clothes and toiletries, preparing the materials for her self-introduction, keeping doing her hair, trimmed and helping her with the clothes when she was for the interviewing, etc. She thinks that I have some experience because of I had a chance to be an airline stewardess.

We went to Qingdao where she was interviewsed for a week. We were almost tired almost every day and we didn’t have time to walk around. We waited until her she has passed the preliminary examination, secondary examination and written examination, then we went back to Jinan.

She is just waiting the results and to be told notified whether she will go to Beijing for medical checks right now (or not).

I’m so nevers even more nervous than her.

In fact, my old classmate wanted to interview for international aviations airlines because she thinks they have low requirements, but I suggested her to give up the idea. She told me that if she doesn’t pass qualify for the domestic company, then she would like to go to Guangzhou to interview for an international airline next week.

I wish her all the best and but I don’t want to go to Guangzhou next week, that’s so tired exhausting. hahaha. :D 

Pleass Bless Her

I have not learned English and/or wrote a diary for a long time, finally I can write something today. My Spring Festival holiday is over and during the holiday I helped my old classmate with an interview for a flight attendant job; like to buy formal clothes and toiletries, preparing the materials for her self-introduction, keeping her hair trimmed and help her with clothes when she was interviewing, etc. She thinks that I have some experience because of I had a chance to be airline stewardess. We went to Qingdao where she interviews for a week, we were almost tired every day and we didn’t have time to walk around, we waited until she passed the preliminary examination, secondary examination and written examination, then we went back to Jinan. She is waiting for the result and to be told whether she will go to Beijing for medical checks right now. I’m so nervous even more than her. In fact, my old classmate wanted to interview international aviations because she thinks they have low requirements, but I suggested she give up the idea, she told me that if she doesn’t pass the domestic company's interview/evaluation, then she would like to go to Guangzhou to interview with the international airline next week. I wish her all the best and I don’t want to go to Guangzhou next week, that’s so tiring, hahaha. :D

Grammar mistakes all over, but I mostly was looking at the words  you used and spelling and how you wrote the sentences. 

Tired = present tense, I am tired. They are tired.

Tiring= used with sentences like: It was tiring. That is tiring. 

before a noun with a vowel (a,e,i,o,u) you add : an ; It was an interesting day. That was an horrible thing to say. That was an awesome job. 

I hope I helped. Keep up the good work.