A person who I really admire

Takyo Osahera is a Japanese man who was sent by Japanese Government to Germany to study.
His dream was to learn how to make a small engine. Instead of taking him to the factory, his teachers started giving him books to read.
He struggled to understand how the engine worked in order to change the future of Japan. Instead of attaining a high level in university, he wore blue clothes and worked as an employee for a German, working between 10-15 hours a day.
It took him 18 years until he gained an understanding of the engine which helped to make the Japanese economy stronger.
I admire him because he was determined to do any thing for his country.

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