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charly's notebook entry: Oct 09, 2010 Today, my brother go to hospital in Guangzhou with me, he had a fever for days. He has gone to see doctor in a town, but the doctor only give him some medicine and intravenous drip. After 7 days, it has no signs of feeling good. The doctor made a exam for him earnestly, she asked him for many things, for example, have or not a headache, have or not snot, have or not ever go to Dongguan,Guangdong, because it is prevalent disease in Dongguan. Finally,The doctor give him some medicine. We go home at 5:00 pm and we arrived home about 7:30pm.

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Charly's notebook entry: Oct 09, 2010

Today, my brother went to hospital in Guangzhou with me. He had a fever for a few days. He went to see doctor in a town, but that doctor gave him some medicine an intravenous drip but after 7 days, he didn't feel any better.

The doctor examined him thoroughly. She asked him for many questions, for example, like did he have or not a headache or not, did he have a stuffy nose  have and did he ever go to Dongguan,Guangdong, because there's a lot of  prevalent disease in Dongguan.

Finally ,the doctor gave him some medicine. We left for home at 5:00 pm and we arrived home about 7:30pm.

Study past tense // Capitallization.

 

(빨간)  Red              = 대문자  Capitalized

 (파란)  Blue            =  정정 & 철자  Correction and Spelling

 (녹색)  Green         =  더 자연적인 방법으로   More natural way

 (자주색)  Purple    =  내 생각에 / 코멘트 /  제안  I think, my comment or suggestion

 (밑줄)  Underline   = 구두점과 띄어쓰기  Punctuation &/or  spacing

 



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