Search from various English teachers...
Brazil flaggisele
My routine. Well, every day I wake up early, take a coffe, but just a cup of coffe whith milk and smoke a cigarette. So I give food to my six dogs, change your water, and have fun with them. Then it´s time of practice exercises. Sometimes I run, sometimes I ride a bicycle. When I back home, it´s time of take a shower and go to work. I work in a glasses shop like a salesgirl. I like that. At 11PM I back home to see my husband and close the day with a gold key.

Corrections · 6

0

My routine.

Well, Every day I wake up early, take a have some coffee, but just a one cup of coffe whith with some milk and smoke a cigarette. So I give food to feed my six dogs, change your their water, and have fun with them (or "and play with them" which is what I might say). Then it´s time of practice to exercises. Sometimes I run, other sometimes I ride a bicycle. When I go back home, it´s time of to take a shower and go to work. I work in a glasses shop like as a salesgirl. I like that enjoy my work (like that is fine but too simplistic). At 11PM I go back home to see my husband and close the day with a gold key.

 

Good job, it sounds like you have a good routine down.  I have no idea what a gold key is though...is that a drink?  

0

My routine.

Well, every day I wake up early, take a coffe, but just a cup of coffe whith milk and smoke a cigarette. ;-) So I give food to my six dogs, change your water, and have fun with them. Then it´s time of practice exercises. Sometimes I run, sometimes I ride a bicycle. When I back home, it´s time of take a shower and go to work. I work in an eyewear glasses shop as like a saleswomangirl. I like that. At 11PM I back home to see my husband and close the day with a gold key.

 

[Gisele, Joey really "nailed it." (That's an American idiom meaning that he did a very good job.) Just a few items that I might say a little differently... In British English, you might 'take' a coffee, but in American English, you'd "'have' a cup of coffee with milk." We would not speak of the store as a glasses shop, rather an eyewear shop. Finally, we draw the line between being a girl and being a woman at approximately age 18. The word "girl" might be used through age 20, but not much longer than that. At 21, there is no doubt that you're a "woman." If you're seeing your husband at 11 pm, perhaps you're closing the bedroom door with a gold key? (Like Joey, I'm in the dark as to the meaning of the gold key.) Tchau.] 

Want to progress faster?

Join this learning community and try out free exercises!

Don’t miss out on the opportunity to learn a language from the comfort of your own home. Browse our selection of experienced language tutors and enroll in your first lesson now!

Start Learning Today