Cloudy mood
Today is cloudy,in Hangzhou.I as usual go to work,the sky was little rain,i drink soya-bean milk,such as the side of a bus,a few minutes latter,the bus come,but there have many people in the bus ,cramped and stuffy,so stand nearly for a hour.this is my life,everyday like this.I know because i younger,so i need struggle.
The good life is to hope,so no matter how hard,i will hold on to the person i love.
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Cloudy mood
Today is cloudy in Hangzhou. I, as usual, go to work. The sky was little raining a little. I drink soya-bean milk*, such as by the side of a bus stop. A few minutes latter later the bus comes and but there are have many people in on the bus. Cramped and stuffy so I stand, for nearly a hour. This is my life, everyday it is like this. I know because I am younger that so I need to struggle. The good life is to hope, so no matter how hard, I will hold on to the person I love.**
(*In English we only call it Soy milk)
(**This sounds like a poem, so I tried not to lose the meaning too much while correcting.)
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