JINOK PARK's notebook entry: Oct 08, 2010 Hello. Please, feel free to correct my writing. Weclome everyone. One of the familiar TOEFL topic. Attending a live performance(for example, a play, concert, or sporting event) is more enjoyable than watching the same event on television. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. Body1. If we attend a live performance, we can enjoy much better than watching TV at home. I know that there are couple of merits to watch TV. For example, we can save time and money. We don't have to wait for a long time in front of a concert hall. However, why many people do want to go to a concert, even though they know that they have to wait for a long time? They know that enjoying the concert in a live performance is more fun than enjoying it at home. When I was a high school student, I went to the stadium to see baseball. That was the first time I went to the stadium. I've never forgot the day because it was so much fun compared to watching the game on TV. After that, mostly, I go to the stadium to see baseball. Thank you for your help. Have a good day.