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First notebook entry: Introducing myself I am nobody ,but I have a great dream, and I am trying to achieve my dream .

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I'm nobody, but I have a great dream. and I am trying to achieve my dream .

To sound much more natural use contractions.  >  I'm, We're, Can't
Watch your spacing
Usually it's best not to start a sentence with "and".  and  (not a rule but it's best)

GO FOR IT~! 

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