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Back to work, Oct 08, 2010 I was in vacation last 7 days and I am back to work today. It was a little busy this holiday. First 3 days I went to Shenzhen and met my college classmates. We played together outside, it was a happy time. In the rest 4 days, I had found a new apartment and rented it. I will move to the apartment these days. It will be busy for me resent days. I will prepare to move and won't have enough time to surf on line at night. I'm looking forward to moving to the new apartment.

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Back to work, Oct 08, 2010

I was on vacation last 7 days and I went back to work today. The holiday was a little busy. The first 3 days I went to Shenzhen and met my college classmates. We hung out together outside, It was a good time. For the remaining 4 days, I had found and rented a new apartment. and rented it. I'll move to the apartment soon, so I'll be busy.  I'll  prepare  to move and  I  won't have enough time to surf on line at night. I'm looking forward to moving to the new apartment.

"hung out" is more common for adults.  "Played" is for children.

Very good.  I just made it a little more natural.

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