Again, Happy New Year!
10th February, 2013.
This is the first day of the new year in the lunar calendar.
I got up very early and helped my mother with our breakfast. I didn’t like the noddles at all, but my mother told me that noddles convey luck and longevity.
After breakfast, I went out to visit my relatives who lives in the same town. I got some candies and lovely snacks.
Before lunch time, I arrived home and did some reading. I wonder how did you spend this lovely day?
Please correct any mistakes, thanks.
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Again, Happy New Year!
10th February, 2013.
This is the first day of the new year in the lunar calendar.
I got up very early and helped my mother with our breakfast. I didn’t like the noodles at all, but my mother told me that noodles convey luck and longevity.
After breakfast, I went out to visit my relatives who live s in the same town. I got some candies and lovely snacks.
Before lunch time, I arrived home and did some reading. I wonder, how did you spend this lovely day? (or: I wonder how you spent this lovely day. But you cannot say: 'I wonder how did you spend this lovely day', you need a comma).
Please correct any mistakes, thanks.
不錯 :D
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