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It is the topic composition (1) Dear editor, I‘m XXX,a student from Class X,Senior X.Recently it has set off a wide discussion whether we should help the old people who falls down on the ground。Large quantities of people are worried about being wronged,for which can account their ignoring the old.Actually their fear can be understood while their cold-hearted action can never be praised。 As far as I am concerned,I always keep it in mind that never can we give up helping others when they are in danger.Everyone is supposed to take on their duty to lift up the old people.Though risking being misunderstood,such suspected action can make you comfortable and enjoyable.What's more,it is obvious that only the hit will media use and spread,so I believe that most of the old will show their thankness after being helped. In conclusion,don't worry,don't think so much,just do what you want to do,no one shall hate to help from the bottom of their heart! Yours faithfully, XXX

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that's very good.I read fast and feel fluent and authentic.

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