Friends ! I‘m coming!

good luck everyone! nice to meet you! 
my name is LIn-xiaofeng,I'am from china,I grew up in SiChuan. 
I'am a teacher,work in NanChong,I want some friends, no matter who you are,no matter where you from. 
I like sports,such as basketball,ride a bike and so on. 
when I whatch film,I'd like some romatic movies,such as "titanic". 
I sing very good,and I am honest for my friends. 
so,come and be my friend,if you want some friends like me.

Good luch everyone! Nice to meet you. 
My name is LIn-xiaofeng. I'm from China and I grew up in SiChuan. 

I'm a teacher and I work in NanChong. I want (to make) some friends, no matter who you are or where are you from. 

I like sports, such as basketball, ride a bike and so on. 

When I watch film, I like some romantic movies, such as 'titanic'. 
I sing very well and I am honest to my friends.
So, come and be my friend, if you want a friend like me.


As I know in English they don't use too much "!" but actually that's not a mistake :)  

Also isn't mistake but try not to make too long sentences... 
You can say I am or I'm but there's no more option, if I'm right :)  

I'd rather say "I like sports, for example basketball..." 
Anyway I'm not a native speaker, I just suggested these things, like an example how would I say :) 
by the way, nice job :)