My winter vacation
Next week,I'll come back to the universty.That means that my winter vacation is over.Of course a little lost,but I'm really looking forward to my new semester.
In china,generally,we students have two long holidais.One is in the summer,and the other is in the winter.Each of them will last almost two monthes. At this winter vacation,I found a part-time job,and I worked for a shop selling Hong Kong-style desserts.The experience working there is very precious for me.And what the most important is that I made lots of friends during that time.
well,,I have to say that I still have a paper to write.Maybe I should reduce the time which I spend on the Internet,and focus more on my specialty.I think I can do better~~~加油加油！！O(∩_∩)O
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My Winter Vacation
Next week, I'll be come back to at the universty. That This means that my winter vacation is over. Of course a little sad lost, but I'm really looking forward to my new semester.
In china, generally,we students have two long holiday periods. holidais. One is in the summer, and the other is in the winter. Each of them will lasting for almost two months monthes. At During this winter vacation, I found a part-time job,and I worked for in a a shop selling Hong Kong-style desserts. The experience working there is very precious for important to me. And what The most important exciting part is that I made lots plenty of friends during that time. [understood]
Well... I have to say that I still have a paper to write. Maybe Perhaps I should reduce lessened the time which I spent on the Internet, and instead, focus more on my homework/term paper/school project specialty. I think [Be more assertive!] I can do better!~~~加油加油！！O(∩_∩)O
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American English usage: I find that we often say "school" to refer to higher education as well, thus making it "I'll be back at school in about a month or so."
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go back to university (omit the 'the' no need for an article here)
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... the time which...
In modern English 'that' is preferred over 'which' unless 'which' is very particular - - this is definitely a case where you should say 'that'
... the time THAT I spend
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Come back
come and go are not simple, but you cannot come back unless the person you are speaking to is in that place - same in Chinese I think with lai/qu ... so it should be GO back. Come or go depends on the perspective of the speaker and the reader/listener.
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