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a black dusty wad Carmela was sweeping the yard in front at her entrance using a broom made by straw. Since she became widow her aspect changed from fat to thin and her two dogs suffered because the lack of own dear owner. She is a woman very talkative, as I can say.. when she start to talk is hard to turn she off . I like to think at her like a local newspaper in flesh and bones. One dog has hairs black with a tone of grey and like ever pets of small size it has a behaviour rather angry, shy and much biting. She told me that for the cleaness of his dog she need the aid of a professionist, a specialist able to immobilize him. It won't being touched absolutely. I suggested she to try using food, some goodies, just for confusing him; sincerely I thought to sedate him.

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Happy Valentine's Day!

Sincerely Alexandra

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a black dusty wad


Carmela was sweeping the yard in front at her doorway or house with  a broom made of straw. Since she became widow her body had gone from  fat to thin and her two dogs suffered because of the lack of their own dear owner.
She is a woman very talkative, as they say.. when she starts to talk it  is hard to turn her off .
I like to think of her like a local newspaper in flesh and bones. (dont understand this sentence)
One dog has  black hairs  with a tone of grey and like all  small pets  it has a rather angry temperament, is wary and  and  prone to biting. She told me that for the cleaness of his dog she need  aprofessional, a specialist able to immobilize him.(Do you mean to make him stop behaving badly?)
It won't being touched absolutely. ??
I suggested she to try using food, perhaps using some goodies so that I could sedate him.

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Hi Eli. It seems that I didn't succeed to make me understand. I had compared that woman and her way to be talkative at an local newspaper (full of news)
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Nice entry Andre, i fear from dogs though! Thank you! I didnt understand"i like to think of her like..... "at all would you please tell me what you meant?

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