My First Notebook Entry

Hi, my name is Connie and I’m a native speaker of English. As an undergraduate, I took one year of Mandarin. I thoroughly enjoyed the class but ultimately forgot most of what I learned after I began taking other courses. That’s quite unfortunately, wouldn’t you agree? Would it be possible for anyone to help edit and improve the sentences that I’ve written in Chinese below? Thanks in advance!

你好，我叫 Connie 。 我是 美国人。我出生在洛杉矶(How do I write in Chinese that I was born in Los Angeles?)。 虽然现在我 有 很都多功课。， 但是 我很高兴 ，因为再过两个星期 in two weeks 我会跟我的朋友去 Las Vegas拉斯维加斯。

I would love to add more details in this paragraph but unfortunately, my vocabulary is very limited. Lamentably, I also find it extremely tricky to type Chinese characters since I'm unfamiliar with pinying. I'll definitely try harder on my next diary entry.

好的开始是成功的一半。加油！

My First Notebook Entry

Hi, my name is Connie and I’m a native speaker of English. As an undergraduate, I took one year of Mandarin. I thoroughly enjoyed the class but ultimately forgot most of what I learned after I began taking other courses. That’s quite unfortunately, wouldn’t you agree? Would it be possible for anyone to help edit and improve the sentences that I’ve written in Chinese below? Thanks in advance!

你好，我的名字叫 Connie（康妮） 。 我是 美国人，在洛杉矶出生。(How do I write in Chinese that I was born in Los Angeles?) 现在，我每天都 有 很 都  多的功课要做。 但是 我很高兴  但让我高兴的是： 因为 in two weeks   两周后，我将跟我的朋友 （Las Vegas)一起去拉斯维加斯。

I would love to add more details in this paragraph but unfortunately, my vocabulary is very limited. Lamentably, I also find it extremely tricky to type Chinese characters since I'm unfamiliar with pinying. I'll definitely try harder on my next diary entry.


Soory ,I didn't found you entry until  today. Many friends have done a geat job  before me .You can learn from them.At the same time, I just edit it in my writing custom,and it's another kind of correction.I hope you will like it ..Besides,these days I am very busy,so please fogive me to correct your first diary entry late.I believe you will master Mandarin finally,and it is just a matter of time .keep on   writing and speaking ,and you will make big  progress in the short time.I  am willing to help you whenever I am free.will you have a good time in Las Vegas.

My First Notebook Entry

Hi, my name is Connie and I’m a native speaker of English. As an undergraduate, I took one year of Mandarin. I thoroughly enjoyed the class but ultimately forgot most of what I learned after I began taking other courses. That’s quite unfortunately, wouldn’t you agree? Would it be possible for anyone to help edit and improve the sentences that I’ve written in Chinese below? Thanks in advance!

你好，我叫康妮，我是美国人，出生于洛杉矶。 最近我功课很多（或者学业很忙），但是我很高兴，因为还有两个星期我就要跟我的朋友去拉斯维加斯了。

I would love to add more details in this paragraph but unfortunately, my vocabulary is very limited. Lamentably, I also find it extremely tricky to type Chinese characters since I'm unfamiliar with pinying. I'll definitely try harder on my next diary entry.

My First Notebook Entry

Hi, my name is Connie and I’m a native speaker of English. As an undergraduate, I took one year of Mandarin. I thoroughly enjoyed the class but ultimately forgot most of what I learned after I began taking other courses. That’s quite unfortunately, wouldn’t you agree? Would it be possible for anyone to help edit and improve the sentences that I’ve written in Chinese below? Thanks in advance!

你好，我叫 Connie 。 我是一个美国人。(How do I write in Chinese that I was born in Los Angeles?) 现在我有多功课。 但是我很高兴，因为in two weeks（再过两星期） 我将和我的朋友去Las Vegas。拉斯维加斯

I would love to add more details in this paragraph but unfortunately, my vocabulary is very limited. Lamentably, I also find it extremely tricky to type Chinese characters since I'm unfamiliar with pinying. I'll definitely try harder on my next diary entry.

My First Notebook Entry

Hi, my name is Connie and I’m a native speaker of English. As an undergraduate, I took one year of Mandarin. I thoroughly enjoyed the class but ultimately forgot most of what I learned after I began taking other courses. That’s quite unfortunately, wouldn’t you agree? Would it be possible for anyone to help edit and improve the sentences that I’ve written in Chinese below? Thanks in advance!

你好，我叫 Connie 。 我是 美国人，出生于洛杉矶。现在我 有 很多功课要做， 但是我还是很高兴 因为两个星期后我要跟朋友去拉斯维加斯玩。

I would love to add more details in this paragraph but unfortunately, my vocabulary is very limited. Lamentably, I also find it extremely tricky to type Chinese characters since I'm unfamiliar with pinying. I'll definitely try harder on my next diary entry.