Spring Festival
Though my family do not often use Lunar calendar,Spring Festival is the traditional festival for everyone in China.Today is the second day in the new year.I went to my grandma's house.I have a great time there.My grandma is 85 years old this year,and she is still in good health.Not only me but everyone in my family hope she can be long-lived.~~~~best wishes to everyone~~~~新年快乐！
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Spring Festival
Though my family don't often use the Lunar calendar, Spring Festival is the traditional festival for everyone in China.Today is the second day of the new year. I went to my grandma's house, I had a great time there. My grandma is 85 years old this year and she's still in good health. Not only me but everyone in my family hopes that she will have a long life .~~~~Best wishes to everyone~~~~新年快乐！
This was well written! In order to increase an impression of fluency you may want to up your use of contractions: do+not = "don't", she+is = "she's"
Also, after every full stop or comma you must put a space!
Other than that, as far as I know, there is no adjective that can act as an equivalent for "long-lived".
加油！ Very good.
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